Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽고 의미 전달이 되지만, 문장이 다소 길고 중복된 표현이 있습니다. 좀 더 간결하고 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'I don't keep plants because some are toxic to my cats.'처럼 간단히 말할 수 있습니다.

例: I don't keep plants at home because some of them can be harmful to my cats.

提案: 답변이 중복되고 불확실한 표현이 많아 명확성이 떨어집니다. 기억이 확실하지 않을 때도 간결하고 명확하게 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'I can't remember exactly, but my mother grew philodendrons.'처럼 말할 수 있습니다.

例: I can't remember exactly, but my mother used to grow philodendrons at home.

提案: 답변에 오타('going plants' 대신 'growing plants')가 있고, 문장이 길고 복잡합니다. 문법과 어휘 사용에 주의하며, 간결하고 명확하게 말하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I don't know much about growing plants because I haven't tried, but I would like to learn when my pets are no longer with me.

提案: 답변이 불완전하고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 'a very popular plants'는 문법적으로 맞지 않으며, 더 구체적인 정보를 제공하는 연습이 필요합니다. 예를 들어, 'I'm not sure about Chinese culture, but I heard that certain plants are popular gifts for grand openings.'처럼 말할 수 있습니다.

例: I'm not sure about Chinese culture, but I heard that certain plants are popular gifts for grand openings.

× I don't really like going plants so I don't have much knowledge about growing them, but I would love to know about it in future when my pets are gone.

✓ I don't really like growing plants so I don't have much knowledge about growing them, but I would love to know about it in the future when my pets are gone.

The phrase 'going plants' is incorrect; the correct verb form is 'growing plants'. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future' to correctly use the definite article with the noun 'future'. This improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I would love to know about it in future when my pets are gone.

✓ I would love to know about it in the future when my pets are gone.

The noun 'future' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific time period. Omitting 'the' is incorrect in this context.

× there's a very popular plants that you give for a grand open.

✓ there are very popular plants that you give for a grand opening.

The phrase 'there's' is a contraction of 'there is', which is singular, but it is incorrectly used with the plural noun 'plants'. It should be 'there are'. Also, 'grand open' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'grand opening'.

× there's a very popular plants that you give for a grand open.

✓ there are very popular plants that you give as gifts for a grand opening.

The preposition 'for' is less appropriate here; 'as gifts' better expresses the idea of giving plants as presents. Also, 'grand open' should be 'grand opening'.

× I don't specify specifically remember the name of the plant.

✓ I don't specifically remember the name of the plant.

The word 'specify' is incorrectly used here. The correct adverb is 'specifically' to modify 'remember'. Also, 'don't specify specifically remember' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'don't specifically remember'.