Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了观点和理由，但语言稍显重复且部分表达不够自然。建议避免使用口语化的“what more”，改用更正式的连接词如“moreover”或“in addition”，并注意时态一致性。

例: Yes, I like to keep plants at home because they improve air quality and make the environment healthier. Moreover, they are beautiful and add decoration to my living space, which helps me feel relaxed.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够准确的问题，如“tomato tree”应为“tomato plant”，时态使用不当。建议注意名词搭配和时态一致性，句子结构应更自然。

例: When I was young, I grew tomato plants in my garden. They were both beautiful and produced delicious tomatoes in autumn when they ripened.

提案: 回答内容较简单，存在语法错误，如“cut it leaves”应为“cut its leaves”，“when they are ripen”应为“when they are ripe”。建议加强语法准确性，并丰富细节。

例: Yes, I learned many skills about growing plants as a child. For example, we should water them regularly and prune their leaves when they are ripe to help them grow better. I find this process very interesting.

提案: 回答内容较好，但表达稍显生硬，缺少冠词和复数形式，如“symbol”应为“a symbol”，“money plants”应为“money plants”。建议注意冠词使用和名词复数形式，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, in China, plants are often considered a symbol of good wishes. When people move to a new home, their friends often send money plants as housewarming gifts to bring good luck.

× Yes, I would like to keep plants at home because they help keep the environment healthy and clean by improving the air quality and what more, they are so beautiful and decorative.

✓ Yes, I like to keep plants at home because they help keep the environment healthy and clean by improving the air quality and what's more, they are so beautiful and decorative.

这里“would like to”表示愿望或请求，不适合描述习惯性行为，改为一般现在时“like to”更合适；另外“what more”应为固定短语“what's more”，表示“更重要的是”。

× I felt so relaxed.

✓ I feel so relaxed.

根据上下文，学生描述的是现在的感受，应该用一般现在时“feel”，而不是过去时“felt”。

× When I was young I grew a tomato tree in my garden.

✓ When I was young I grew a tomato plant in my garden.

“tomato tree”不符合实际，番茄是植物而非树，应使用“tomato plant”。

× When the autumn came to the plant was ripe and I can gain delicious tomatoes.

✓ When autumn came, the plant was ripe and I could get delicious tomatoes.

“came”是过去时，后面应保持时态一致，改“can”成过去时“could”；“gain”用词不当，改为“get”更自然；“When the autumn came to”结构错误，改为“When autumn came”。

× Yes, when I was a child I learned a lot of skills about growing a plant.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I learned a lot of skills about growing plants.

“a plant”指单数植物，而“skills about growing”通常指种植植物的技能，复数“plants”更合适。

× For example, we should water it and cut it leaves when they are ripen.

✓ For example, we should water it and cut its leaves when they are ripe.

“cut it leaves”中“it”应为物主代词“its”；“ripen”是动词，形容词应为“ripe”。

× Yes, in China, plants are often considered symbol of beautiful wishes.

✓ Yes, in China, plants are often considered symbols of beautiful wishes.

“symbol”应为复数“symbols”，因为“plants”是复数，需保持一致。

× When people move to a new home, their friends often send money plants as house warming gifts to bring good luck.

✓ When people move to a new home, their friends often send money plants as housewarming gifts to bring good luck.

“house warming”应写作复合词“housewarming”，表示乔迁。