Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“he planted”应为“she planted”，以及表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: No, I don't keep plants at home, but my mother loves them and has planted many beautiful ones. There are so many different kinds that I can't remember all their names.

提案: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态，简洁表达，并注意主语一致。

例: When I was a child, I planted a beautiful apple tree in my hometown. However, I moved to the city before it grew up, so I never got to see it fully grown.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，如“shower it too much”应为“water it too much”，建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子。

例: I don't know much about growing plants, but I do know some basics. For example, we shouldn't water them too much because they might die. Also, plants need enough sunlight to grow well.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误，如“funds”应为“plants”，句子不完整且表达混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确词汇，并完整表达观点。

例: Unfortunately, Chinese people don't usually give plants as gifts. This might be because plants can be either very cheap or very expensive, and people may not know their value, so it's considered inappropriate.

× There are a lot of kind of different plants that I can't know every of them.

✓ There are a lot of kinds of different plants that I can't know every one of them.

这里的错误是单复数形式使用不当。'kind' 应该用复数形式 'kinds'，表示多种类；'every of them' 结构不正确，应该用 'every one of them'。建议注意名词的单复数形式和固定搭配的使用。

× but my mother likes plants very much, so he planted a lot of beautiful plants at home.

✓ but my mother likes plants very much, so she planted a lot of beautiful plants at home.

这里代词使用错误，'my mother' 是第三人称单数女性，应该用 'she' 而不是 'he'。建议根据主语性别选择正确的代词。

× I have planted a very beautiful apple tree when I was a little child in my hometown.

✓ I planted a very beautiful apple tree when I was a little child in my hometown.

句中时间状语 'when I was a little child' 明确指过去，应该用一般过去时 'planted'，而不是现在完成时 'have planted'。建议根据时间状语选择正确的时态。

× However, before he grew before the tree grow up, I have to move my home to the city center so I didn't see it.

✓ However, before it grew up, I had to move my home to the city center so I didn't see it.

这里代词 'he' 用错，指代树应该用 'it'；'grow' 应该用过去式 'grew'；'have to' 应该用过去式 'had to'，因为动作发生在过去。建议注意代词指代和时态一致。

× I have to move my home to the city center so I didn't see it.

✓ I had to move my home to the city center so I didn't see it.

动作发生在过去，'have to' 应该用过去式 'had to'。建议时态保持一致。

× I just know some basic skills. For example, we shouldn't. Shower it too much or it will, uh, die.

✓ I just know some basic skills. For example, we shouldn't water it too much or it will, uh, die.

这里 'shower' 用法不当，应该用 'water' 来表达给植物浇水。建议根据语境选择正确的动词。

× And also plants need very enough sunshine.

✓ And also plants need enough sunshine.

'very enough' 是错误搭配，'enough' 本身表示足够，不需要 'very' 修饰。建议注意量词和程度副词的正确搭配。

× Uh, unfortunately Chinese people, uh, didn't send funds as gifts.

✓ Uh, unfortunately Chinese people, uh, don't send plants as gifts.

这里时态用错，描述习惯性动作应该用一般现在时 'don't send'，而不是过去时 'didn't send'。另外 'funds' 应该是 'plants'。建议注意时态和词汇的正确使用。

× Uh, as we all know, plans always very cheap or very expensive.

✓ Uh, as we all know, plants are always very cheap or very expensive.

'plans' 应为 'plants'；缺少动词 'are'；'plants' 是复数，需注意主谓一致。建议注意拼写和主谓一致。

× We can't guarantee that everyone know its price, so it's not proper to.

✓ We can't guarantee that everyone knows their price, so it's not proper to.

'everyone' 是单数，动词应为 'knows'；'its' 指代不明确，改为复数 'their' 更合适。建议注意主谓一致和代词指代一致。