Plants— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you keep plants at home?
受験者
No, I don't keep any plants at home. Instead I grow sunflowers and trees in my garden.
試験官
What plant did you grow when you were young?
受験者
When I was young, I grew tomatoes with my father. It was exciting to see them grow and even more fun to eat them.
試験官
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
受験者
Yes, I know a bit about growing plants. I have a small garden at home where I grow some flowers and trees. My parents taught me the basics like.
試験官
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
受験者
No, not really. They might prefer more practical gifts like foods or household items.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you keep plants at home?
スコア: 75.0提案: 回答は自然ですが、「instead」を使った対比が少し不明瞭です。より明確に対比を示し、文を簡潔にすると良いでしょう。
例: No, I don't keep plants inside my home. Instead, I grow sunflowers and trees in my garden, which I find more enjoyable.
What plant did you grow when you were young?
スコア: 85.0提案: 回答は具体的で良いですが、接続詞を使って文の流れをより滑らかにするとさらに良くなります。
例: When I was young, I grew tomatoes with my father, and it was exciting to see them grow; moreover, it was even more fun to eat them.
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答が途中で終わっており、具体的な内容が不足しています。文を完結させ、具体的な知識や経験を詳しく述べると良いでしょう。
例: Yes, I know a bit about growing plants. I have a small garden at home where I grow flowers and trees. My parents taught me the basics, such as watering regularly and providing enough sunlight.
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
スコア: 80.0提案: 回答は簡潔で自然ですが、理由や背景を加えて内容を充実させるとより良いです。
例: No, not really. Chinese people usually prefer more practical gifts like food or household items because these are considered useful and thoughtful.
文法
× My parents taught me the basics like.
✓ My parents taught me the basics.
The sentence ends with 'like' which is a preposition that requires an object to complete the meaning. Ending the sentence with 'like' without specifying what follows results in an incomplete sentence structure. To correct this, remove 'like' or complete the sentence by specifying what the basics are like.
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