Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并注意冠词和单复数的使用。

例: Yes, I keep some plants at home, such as lilies and roses, because I find them very beautiful and they smell nice.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和表达方式。

例: When I was a child, around seventh grade, I grew rose plants because I thought they were beautiful and easy to care for. I took good care of them.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，词汇使用不准确，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和表达方式，避免重复。

例: Yes, I know some basics about growing plants. For example, I should water them regularly, usually once a day, and use fertilizer to help them grow well.

提案: 回答中有语法错误，表达不清晰，且信息不准确。建议使用正确的语法，清晰表达观点，并提供准确的例子。

例: Yes, Chinese people often give plants as gifts. For example, they might give a bonsai tree to elderly people because it symbolizes longevity and good health.

× Yes, I keep some plans at home like lilies and roses because I think the these flowers are very beautiful and I love flowers and I think it's smell good also.

✓ Yes, I keep some plants at home like lilies and roses because I think these flowers are very beautiful and I love flowers and I think they smell good also.

这里的 'plans' 应为 'plants'，因为题目是关于植物。'the these flowers' 中 'the' 多余，应去掉。'it's smell good' 中 'it's' 应改为复数代词 'they'，因为指的是复数的花。

× When I was in my childhood I once grew a rose flower when I when I add my 7th grade 7th grade because I think roses are very beautiful and and and easy to grow.

✓ When I was a child, I once grew a rose flower when I was in my 7th grade because I think roses are very beautiful and easy to grow.

'When I was in my childhood' 应改为 'When I was a child'，更地道。'when I add my 7th grade' 应为过去时 'when I was in my 7th grade'。

× So I grow the roses and keep it very well.

✓ So I grew the roses and kept them very well.

时态应与前文一致，改为过去时。'keep it' 中 'it' 指代复数 'roses'，应改为复数代词 'them'。

× For example, I should water the plants about three times a day and also I should use some paste fertilize to fertilize them very much.

✓ For example, I should water the plants about three times a day and also I should use some paste fertilizer to fertilize them well.

'paste fertilize' 应为名词 'paste fertilizer'。'fertilize them very much' 表达不自然，改为 'fertilize them well' 更合适。

× Yes, Chinese people sends a lot of plants as gift.

✓ Yes, Chinese people send a lot of plants as gifts.

'Chinese people' 是复数，谓语动词应为 'send'。'as gift' 应为复数 'as gifts'。

× For example, Chinese people send a pie for their for old people because pie means people can grow older.

✓ For example, Chinese people send a pie to their old people because pie means people can grow older.

'for their for old people' 中多余一个 'for'，应去掉。

× For example, Chinese people send a pie for their for old people because pie means people can grow older.

✓ For example, Chinese people send a pie to their old people because pie means people can grow older.

动词 'send' 后应接介词 'to' 表示送给某人。