Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более естественным и структурированным. Избегайте лишних пауз и слов-паразитов, таких как "uh" и "umm". Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте конкретные детали, используя связующие слова для логичности.

例: Yes, I do keep plants at home because my mother loves gardening. As a result, we have many flowers, which I believe contribute positively to our health.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и повторения. Следует использовать правильные времена и избегать повторов. Начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте детали с помощью связующих слов.

例: When I was young, my grandparents had many roses in their garden. Because of that, my grandmother gave me a rose plant, which I took care of and grew successfully.

提案: Ответ нечеткий и содержит грамматические ошибки. Следует использовать правильные конструкции и более четко выражать мысли. Используйте связующие слова для плавности.

例: Yes, I do know about growing plants because I have a hobby at school where we grow plants in the laboratory. Our teacher teaches us how to take care of them properly.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует отвечать прямо, избегать повторов и использовать связующие слова для логичности. Также важно уточнить информацию и привести пример.

例: I am not sure, but I have a Chinese friend who gave me a bouquet of flowers for my birthday. So, I believe that Chinese people do send plants or flowers as gifts on special occasions.

× my grandparents, umm, keep kept, uh, a lot of roses in their garden

✓ my grandparents, umm, kept a lot of roses in their garden

The verb 'keep' should be in the past tense 'kept' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was a child'. The original sentence incorrectly uses both present and past forms together, which is grammatically incorrect.

× I, I grow these plants

✓ I grew these plants

Since the context is about the past ('when I was a child'), the verb should be in the past tense 'grew' instead of the present tense 'grow'.

× It's grow a plan in laboratory

✓ I grow a plant in the laboratory

The sentence lacks a proper subject and uses 'It's' incorrectly. The correct form is 'I grow a plant in the laboratory' to express a habitual action in the present.

× our teacher teach our how we can care about take care about our plans and

✓ our teacher teaches us how we can take care of our plants

The prepositions 'about' are incorrectly used. The correct phrase is 'take care of' something. Also, 'teach' should be 'teaches' to agree with the singular subject 'teacher', and 'our' should be 'us' as the object pronoun.

× he gave me. Bear with flowers in my birthday

✓ he gave me a bear with flowers on my birthday

The article 'a' is missing before 'bear'. Also, the preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to specific days like 'my birthday'.

× Chinese people send plants as a birthday

✓ Chinese people send plants as birthday gifts

The phrase 'as a birthday' is incomplete and incorrect. It should be 'as birthday gifts' to correctly express the idea of giving plants as gifts for birthdays.