Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but has grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Try to use complete sentences and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific about the types of plants and herbs you grow.

例: Yes, I keep a variety of plants at home because they improve air quality and add natural beauty to my living space. For example, I grow herbs like basil and mint, which I often use in cooking.

提案: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use past tense correctly and clarify your ideas. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and avoid vague expressions like 'then tailor'.

例: When I was young, I grew sunflowers in my backyard. I took care of them by watering them daily, and I always enjoyed watching them grow.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Use correct sentence structures and vocabulary. Be specific about what you know and avoid unrelated words like 'Neat'.

例: Yes, I know how to grow plants. I have grown some herbs and flowers in my home garden, and my father taught me the basics of plant care, such as watering and providing enough sunlight.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and unclear. Use singular and plural forms correctly and avoid repeating words. Provide specific examples of occasions when plants are given as gifts.

例: Yes, Chinese people often give plants as gifts during weddings and other ceremonies. For instance, flowers are commonly presented at business events and celebrations.

× This is not only improve air quality but also touch with nature and beauty of my living space.

✓ This not only improves air quality but also connects me with nature and the beauty of my living space.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and verb form. 'This is not only improve' should be 'This not only improves' to agree with the singular subject 'This' and to use the correct verb form. Also, 'touch with nature' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'connects me with nature'. The sentence needs to be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× And I also grow awesome herbs for cooking.

✓ And I also grow awesome herbs for cooking.

No correction needed here as 'grow' is correctly used in present tense to describe habitual action.

× When I was young I grow a sunflower in my backyard and I care of them and watering daily and I always enjoy to watch them grow then tailor.

✓ When I was young, I grew a sunflower in my backyard. I took care of it and watered it daily, and I always enjoyed watching it grow and then bloom.

The verbs 'grow', 'care', 'watering', and 'enjoy' should be in past tense to match 'When I was young'. 'Grow' becomes 'grew', 'care' becomes 'took care', 'watering' should be 'watered', and 'enjoy' becomes 'enjoyed'. Also, 'enjoy to watch' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoyed watching'. 'Then tailor' is unclear and likely a typo; 'then bloom' fits better in context.

× When I was young I grow a sunflower in my backyard and I care of them and watering daily and I always enjoy to watch them grow then tailor.

✓ When I was young, I grew a sunflower in my backyard. I took care of it and watered it daily, and I always enjoyed watching it grow and then bloom.

The phrase 'enjoy to watch' is incorrect; the verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund ('watching'). Also, 'watering' should be 'watered' to maintain past tense consistency.

× When I was young I grow a sunflower in my backyard and I care of them and watering daily and I always enjoy to watch them grow then tailor.

✓ When I was young, I grew a sunflower in my backyard. I took care of it and watered it daily, and I always enjoyed watching it grow and then bloom.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect when referring to a singular sunflower; it should be 'it'.

× Yes I know growing up plants and I also grow a some harp and flowers in my home carton and my father always taught me basics for the plant care like watering and sunlight.

✓ Yes, I know about growing plants, and I also grow some herbs and flowers in my home garden. My father always taught me the basics of plant care, like watering and sunlight.

'Growing up plants' is incorrect; it should be 'growing plants'. 'A some harp' is incorrect; it should be 'some herbs'. 'Home carton' is likely a typo for 'home garden'. Also, 'basics for the plant care' should be 'basics of plant care'.

× Yes I know growing up plants and I also grow a some harp and flowers in my home carton and my father always taught me basics for the plant care like watering and sunlight.

✓ Yes, I know about growing plants, and I also grow some herbs and flowers in my home garden. My father always taught me the basics of plant care, like watering and sunlight.

The preposition 'for' in 'basics for the plant care' is incorrect; it should be 'basics of plant care'.

× Yes, Chinese people send plants as a gift for a wedding and any any ceremony and some Chinese people people give a flower boutique in any participation and any business ceremony.

✓ Yes, Chinese people send plants as gifts for weddings and various ceremonies, and some Chinese people give flower bouquets at events and business ceremonies.

'Plants as a gift' should be 'plants as gifts' to match plural 'plants'. 'Any any ceremony' is repetitive and should be 'various ceremonies'. 'People people' is a repetition error. 'A flower boutique' is incorrect; it should be 'flower bouquets'. 'Any participation' is unclear; 'events' is more appropriate.