Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但表达略显简单且有些重复。建议避免重复表达“study”和“focus on my studies”，可以丰富词汇和句式，使回答更流畅。

例: Yes, I keep a few green plants in my living room. They not only add a touch of nature to the space but also help me relax and concentrate better when I study.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和拼写错误，如“plant”应为“planted”，“Peps”应为“seeds”，且句子结构不够连贯。建议注意时态一致和拼写准确，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: When I was a child, I planted beans in primary school as part of a science project. We watered the seeds every day and watched them slowly sprout, which was a fascinating experience for me.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“chronology”用错，且句子结构不完整。建议使用正确词汇表达基本知识，并注意主谓一致和时态。

例: Yes, I know that plants need enough sunlight, water, and nutrient-rich soil to grow well. Although I don't have much experience, I often watch my mother gardening, which helps me learn more.

提案: 回答中有多处语法和拼写错误，如“plans”应为“plants”，“orchest”应为“orchids”，句子结构混乱。建议理清句子结构，使用正确词汇，并增加细节使表达更清晰。

例: Yes, Chinese people do give plants as gifts, although it's not very common. Usually, friends or family give plants like bamboo or orchids when someone moves into a new home or starts a new business. I think it's a thoughtful gift, especially for those who like plants.

× We plant these small Peps, water them every day and watching them slowly sprout.

✓ We planted these small peas, watered them every day and watched them slowly sprout.

这里的动词时态需要保持一致，且名词“Peps”应为复数形式“peas”。句子描述的是过去的事情，动词应使用过去式。

× We plant these small Peps, water them every day and watching them slowly sprout.

✓ We planted these small peas, watered them every day and watched them slowly sprout.

动词并列时，所有动词形式应保持一致，不能混用动词原形和动名词。

× I know some basic chronology such as fact that their plants need sufficient sunlight, water and super soil.

✓ I know some basic knowledge such as the fact that plants need sufficient sunlight, water and good soil.

“chronology”用词不当，应为“knowledge”；“their plants”应为“plants”；“super soil”应为“good soil”。

× I don't know that much but my mother love gardening so sometimes I just watching her doing it.

✓ I don't know that much but my mother loves gardening so sometimes I just watch her doing it.

主语是第三人称单数“my mother”，动词应加-s变为“loves”；“I just watching”应为“I just watch”，动词形式错误。

× I don't know that much but my mother love gardening so sometimes I just watching her doing it.

✓ I don't know that much but my mother loves gardening so sometimes I just watch her doing it.

“watching”应改为动词原形“watch”，因为前面有助动词“just”修饰。

× Yes people in China do give plans but it's not that common.

✓ Yes, people in China do give plants but it's not that common.

“plans”应为“plants”，拼写错误。

× Usually it's friends or family like her give giving like a bamboo or orchest like when someone into the new home or opera business.

✓ Usually it's friends or family like her giving a bamboo or orchid when someone moves into a new home or opens a business.

“like her give giving”结构错误，应为“like her giving”；“orchest”拼写错误，应为“orchid”；“someone into the new home or opera business”缺少动词，应为“someone moves into a new home or opens a business”。

× Usually it's friends or family like her give giving like a bamboo or orchest like when someone into the new home or opera business.

✓ Usually it's friends or family like her giving a bamboo or orchid when someone moves into a new home or opens a business.

“opera business”应为“open a business”，动词使用错误。

× I think it's a really nice idea especially if the person like plants.

✓ I think it's a really nice idea especially if the person likes plants.

主语是第三人称单数“the person”，动词应加-s变为“likes”。