Plants— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you keep plants at home?
受験者
Yes, I do keep plants at home. I enjoy taking care of them and I think they're really nice for the aesthetic and the interior.
試験官
What plant did you grow when you were young?
受験者
I've always liked to grow strawberries because umm I know when that I pick them up they will be fresh and I can eat a healthy and non-toxic fruit.
試験官
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
受験者
Yes, I know how to grow a plant because my grandma used to teach me how to and for example, she used to teach me how to water them properly or where to put them so they can have enough sunlight and I really enjoy doing that now.
試験官
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
受験者
I'm not really sure if that's part of their culture, but I know that they really appreciate flowers as a gift. I know that they enjoy taking care of plants and their flowers everywhere in China, for example, the pretty Chinese blossom tree.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you keep plants at home?
スコア: 75.0提案: Опитайте се да направите отговора си по-естествен и по-структуриран. Започнете с директен отговор, след това добавете конкретни детайли и използвайте свързващи думи, за да направите изказването по-логично.
例: Yes, I keep several plants at home because I enjoy taking care of them. Moreover, they enhance the aesthetic appeal of my living space and improve the interior atmosphere.
What plant did you grow when you were young?
スコア: 65.0提案: Опитайте се да избягвате колебания като "umm" и да използвате по-ясна и граматически правилна структура. Добавете свързващи думи и конкретни причини за избора на растението.
例: When I was young, I liked growing strawberries because I knew I could pick fresh, healthy, and pesticide-free fruit directly from the plant.
Do you know anything about growing a plant?
スコア: 80.0提案: Отговорът е добър, но може да бъде по-кратък и по-структуриран. Използвайте свързващи думи, за да направите изказването по-ясно и избягвайте повторения.
例: Yes, I know how to grow plants because my grandma taught me. For example, she showed me how to water them correctly and place them where they get enough sunlight, which I still enjoy doing today.
Do Chinese people send plants as gifts?
スコア: 70.0提案: Опитайте се да дадете по-ясен и по-уверен отговор, като използвате свързващи думи и конкретни примери. Избягвайте повторения и неясни изрази като "I'm not really sure".
例: Although I'm not certain if sending plants is a common tradition in China, I know that flowers are highly appreciated as gifts. For instance, the beautiful Chinese blossom tree is widely admired and cared for across the country.
文法
× I enjoy taking care of them and I think they're really nice for the aesthetic and the interior.
✓ I enjoy taking care of them and I think they're really nice for the aesthetics and the interior.
The word 'aesthetic' is a noun or adjective, but in this context, the plural noun 'aesthetics' is appropriate to refer to the overall visual appeal. Using 'aesthetic' singularly here is incorrect.
× I've always liked to grow strawberries because umm I know when that I pick them up they will be fresh and I can eat a healthy and non-toxic fruit.
✓ I've always liked growing strawberries because I know that when I pick them, they will be fresh and I can eat a healthy and non-toxic fruit.
The sentence has awkward phrasing and unnecessary words like 'to grow' after 'liked' and 'umm' which should be omitted. Also, 'when that I pick them up' is incorrect; it should be 'when I pick them'. The verb form after 'liked' should be the gerund 'growing' rather than the infinitive 'to grow'.
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