Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了原因，但有语法错误和用词不当，如“playing”应为“plants”。建议注意单词拼写和句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

例: No, I don't keep plants at home because I have four cats. If I do, they might eat the plants, which could harm their stomachs, so I choose not to keep any plants.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“kept any plans”应为“didn't keep any plants”，且句子结构不完整。建议使用完整句子并注意主谓一致。

例: I don't remember growing any plants when I was young, but my mom loved plants and kept many kinds on the balcony. I really enjoyed watching them grow under the sunlight.

提案: 回答简短且表达不够准确，如“that's all I need”应为“that's all they need”。建议扩展内容并使用正确的表达。

例: I know a little about growing plants. They need water, sunlight, and good soil to grow well. That's basically all they require.

提案: 回答中有词汇错误，如“plans”应为“plants”，且表达不够连贯。建议减少口头语，使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子。

例: Yes, Chinese people often send plants as gifts, especially for housewarmings and business openings. They usually choose lucky bamboo or other plants that symbolize good fortune.

× No I really want to but I have 4 cats, if I keep playing at home they will eat them and it's very harmful for their stomach so I choose not to keep plants at home.

✓ No, I really want to but I have 4 cats. If I keep plants at home, they will eat them and it's very harmful for their stomachs, so I choose not to keep plants at home.

The word 'playing' is incorrect; it should be 'plants' to match the context. Also, 'stomach' should be plural 'stomachs' because it refers to multiple cats. The sentence also needs proper punctuation for clarity.

× I can remember I kept any plans when I was young, but my mom really loved uh plants and he kept so many kinds of plants on the balcony.

✓ I can remember I kept some plants when I was young, but my mom really loved plants and she kept so many kinds of plants on the balcony.

The word 'plans' is incorrect; it should be 'plants'. 'Any' is not appropriate here; 'some' fits better. Also, 'he' should be 'she' to refer to 'my mom'.

× I can remember I kept any plans when I was young, but my mom really loved uh plants and he kept so many kinds of plants on the balcony.

✓ I can remember I kept some plants when I was young, but my mom really loved plants and she kept so many kinds of plants on the balcony.

The pronoun 'he' is incorrect when referring to 'my mom'; it should be 'she'.

× I really enjoy to see them grow under the sunlight.

✓ I really enjoy seeing them grow in the sunlight.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund ('seeing'), not an infinitive ('to see'). Also, 'under the sunlight' is better expressed as 'in the sunlight'.

× Yes, Chinese people love sending plans as a gift, especially for the, uh, house warming and a new opening of a business.

✓ Yes, Chinese people love sending plants as gifts, especially for housewarmings and the opening of a new business.

'Plans' should be 'plants'. 'Gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match 'sending'. 'House warming' is one word 'housewarming'. 'A new opening of a business' is better as 'the opening of a new business'.