Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误和用词不当，如“night plants”应为“real plants”，且句子结构较复杂，建议简化句子并使用更准确的词汇。

例: No, I don't keep plants at home because they usually die quickly. Instead, I like to decorate my house with delicate porcelain items.

提案: 回答内容不够连贯，存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如“plan several acres”应为“plant several acres”，“quite an development”表达不准确。建议使用简单句并注意语法和词汇的准确性。

例: When I was young, I planted cotton. My family lived in the countryside, and we grew cotton on several acres of land to earn money, but it was not enough to improve our situation.

提案: 回答中存在多处语法错误和表达不清，如“fastest step”应为“first step”，“wait pensioning”表达错误，句子结构混乱。建议简化表达，使用正确的时态和词汇。

例: I know a little about growing plants. First, you need to prepare the soil and plant the seeds. I once tried to grow vegetables at home, but they did not survive, so I stopped trying.

提案: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但部分表达可以更地道，如“show our blessings”应为“offer our best wishes”，且句子可以更简洁。建议使用更地道的表达和简洁句式。

例: Yes, Chinese people often give plants or flowers as gifts, especially when someone buys a new house. It's a practical and affordable way to offer best wishes.

× my plants always wither within a week, so compared to night plants, I decorate my house with some delicate porcelains instead.

✓ my plants always wither within a week, so compared to night plants, I decorate my house with some delicate porcelain instead.

“porcelains”是不可数名词，表示瓷器时不加复数形式，应使用“porcelain”。

× I planted a cotton when I was little.

✓ I planted cotton when I was little.

“cotton”作为不可数名词时不加冠词和复数形式，表示棉花。

× the local economy was quite an development

✓ the local economy was quite underdeveloped

“an development”用法错误，应使用形容词“underdeveloped”来修饰“economy”，表示经济不发达。

× we had to plan several acres of cotton to earn anything but in fact plenty.

✓ we had to plant several acres of cotton to earn anything but in fact not plenty.

“plan”应为“plant”，表示种植；“anything but in fact plenty”表达不清，应改为“not plenty”表示实际上不多。

× I know the fastest step was to prepare the soil for seeds and what is the seeds and then wait pensioning for them to grow up.

✓ I know the first step was to prepare the soil for seeds, understand what the seeds are, and then wait patiently for them to grow.

“fastest step”应为“first step”；“what is the seeds”语法错误，应为“understand what the seeds are”；“wait pensioning”错误，应为“wait patiently”。

× I remember that once I tried it to grow some vegetables in my house, but after a month never failed to survive.

✓ I remember that once I tried to grow some vegetables in my house, but after a month they all failed to survive.

“tried it to grow”错误，应为“tried to grow”；“never failed to survive”表达相反，应为“failed to survive”。

× if my friends bought a new house, we could send her a pot of plants or some flowers to show our blessings

✓ if my friends bought a new house, we could send them a pot of plants or some flowers to show our blessings

“friends”是复数，代词应使用“them”而非“her”。