Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达需更自然，避免语法错误，如将“it is satisfying leisure activities”改为“it is a satisfying leisure activity”。同时，回答可以稍微丰富，增加一些细节。

例: Yes, I keep strawberries and cherry tomatoes on my balcony because gardening is a relaxing and rewarding hobby for me.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“small cities”应为“small seeds”，“strawberries flowers”应为“strawberry flowers”。建议注意单复数和词汇准确性，同时表达更简洁自然。

例: When I was young, I grew tomatoes and strawberries in my backyard. I enjoyed watching the small seeds gradually grow into healthy plants that produced ripe red tomatoes and beautiful strawberry flowers.

提案: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯，如“because”后面可以加上“which”。同时，可以增加具体细节使内容更丰富。

例: Yes, I know how to control the amount of fertilizer and water the plants properly, which are both very important factors to help plants grow healthily.

提案: 回答中有拼写错误，“plans”应为“plants”。表达可以更自然，避免“simply like”这种不太准确的表达。建议增加更多具体细节。

例: Yes, many Chinese people often give plants as gifts, especially bamboo or beautiful flowers, because they symbolize good luck and prosperity. For example, bamboo is a popular gift when someone moves into a new home, as it is believed to bring positive energy.

× I think it is satisfying leisure activities.

✓ I think they are satisfying leisure activities.

这里的主语是复数的“leisure activities”，谓语动词和代词应与之保持一致，使用复数形式“they are”。

× I really enjoyed watching the small cities gradually grew into healthy plants that produce ripe red tomatoes and beautiful strawberries flowers.

✓ I really enjoyed watching the small seedlings gradually grow into healthy plants that produce ripe red tomatoes and beautiful strawberry flowers.

原句中“cities”应为“seedlings”（幼苗），且“grew”应改为动词原形“grow”以符合“watching”后动词原形的用法；“strawberries flowers”应为“strawberry flowers”，形容词修饰名词时用单数形式。

× I know how to control the amount of fertilizer and how to water the plants properly because both of these factors are very important for helping the plants grow healthily.

✓ I know how to control the amount of fertilizer and how to water the plants properly because both of these factors are very important in helping the plants grow healthily.

介词“for”在此处应改为“in”，表示“在……方面”，更符合英语习惯。

× Yes, many Chinese people often send plans as gifts to others, especially bamboo or beautiful flowers, because they simply like good luck and prosperity.

✓ Yes, many Chinese people often send plants as gifts to others, especially bamboo or beautiful flowers, because they simply like good luck and prosperity.

原句中“plans”应为“plants”，拼写错误导致词义错误。