Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və cümlələri daha təbii və axıcı edin. Məsələn, 'I keep plans' əvəzinə 'I keep plants' demək daha düzgündür. Cümlələri qısa və aydın saxlayın.

例: Yes, I keep plants at home because my mother influenced me. She loves growing plants and encouraged me to do the same. Since then, I have been very fascinated by them.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə zaman formalarını düzgün istifadə edin və daha dəqiq ifadələr seçin. Məsələn, 'I grow' əvəzinə 'I grew' istifadə edin. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi daha aydın və qısa ifadə edin.

例: When I was young, I grew some flowers in my backyard. It was fun to watch them grow taller every day, and I felt very happy seeing their progress.

提案: Cümlələrinizi daha aydın və qrammatik cəhətdən düzgün qurun. 'Current plan' əvəzinə 'growing plants' demək daha uyğundur. Həmçinin, lazımsız sözləri çıxarın və fikri daha səlis ifadə edin.

例: I don't know much about growing plants because I live in an apartment with limited space. So, I usually buy plants from stores instead of growing them myself.

提案: Cavabınızı daha inamlı və aydın ifadə edin. Lazımsız 'umm' və 'uh' kimi sözləri çıxarın. Cümlələri tam və məntiqli şəkildə tamamlayın.

例: I don't know much about Chinese customs, but I think plants are commonly given as gifts because they are calming and make nice presents for people.

× Yes, I keep plans at my home this is because of my mother's influence on me and she likes grow plants and she made me grow them at my home and since then I have very. Fascinate.

✓ Yes, I keep plants at my home. This is because of my mother's influence on me; she likes to grow plants and she made me grow them at my home. Since then, I have been very fascinated.

The word 'plans' should be 'plants' to refer to living organisms. Also, 'fascinate' is incorrectly used; the correct form is 'fascinated' to describe a feeling. Additionally, the sentence structure is fragmented and needs punctuation for clarity.

× Well, when I was young I grow some flowers at my backyard and it was so fun to grow them and it was very grateful for me to look them and see that they are become taller.

✓ Well, when I was young, I grew some flowers in my backyard and it was so fun to grow them. I was very grateful to look at them and see that they became taller.

The verb 'grow' should be in past tense 'grew' to match the past time frame. 'Grateful for me to look them' is incorrect; it should be 'grateful to look at them'. 'Are become' is incorrect; it should be 'became' to indicate past tense.

× Well, when I was young I grow some flowers at my backyard and it was so fun to grow them and it was very grateful for me to look them and see that they are become taller.

✓ Well, when I was young, I grew some flowers in my backyard and it was so fun to grow them. I was very grateful to look at them and see that they became taller.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect with 'backyard'; the correct preposition is 'in'. Also, 'look them' should be 'look at them'.

× Well I don't have any information about current plan because I live in an apartment and I don't have any space, umm uh at my home so I just only buy from stores.

✓ Well, I don't have any information about current plants because I live in an apartment and I don't have any space at my home, so I only buy them from stores.

The word 'plan' should be 'plants' to match the context. Also, 'just only buy from stores' is awkward; 'only buy them from stores' is clearer.

× Uh, well, uh, to be honest, I don't have any information about Chinese people, but I uh, think that, umm, commonly they sent, uh, plants as a gift because, umm, gifts are, umm, plants are uh, very, umm, calming and it's a nice gift for people who.

✓ Uh, well, uh, to be honest, I don't have any information about Chinese people, but I uh, think that, umm, commonly they send plants as gifts because, umm, plants are very calming and it's a nice gift for people.

The verb 'sent' is past tense but the sentence refers to a general fact, so 'send' (present tense) is correct. Also, 'gifts are, umm, plants are' is redundant; it should be 'plants are'. The sentence was incomplete and has been completed for clarity.