Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda çoxlu təkrarlamalar və durğunluqlar var. Daha təbii və axıcı danışmaq üçün sözləri təkrarlamamaq və cümlələri qısa, aydın saxlamaq vacibdir. Məsələn, fikrinizi birbaşa ifadə edin və əlavə dəstəkləyici məlumatları əlaqələndirici sözlərlə təqdim edin.

例: I don't have any plants at home right now, but I plan to grow pond plants because I find them calming and they look beautiful.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və məna aydınlığı çatışmazlığı var. Daha düzgün ifadə üçün sadə və aydın cümlələr qurun, fikirlərinizi əlaqələndirici sözlərlə birləşdirin və dəqiq məlumat verin.

例: When I was young, I grew a cactus. It is easy to take care of because it needs little water, which suited my busy lifestyle.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və ifadə qarışıqlığı var. Daha aydın və təbii danışmaq üçün fikirlərinizi sadə və düzgün cümlələrlə ifadə edin və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə edin.

例: I don't know much about growing plants, but I understand that you need to water them regularly and take care of them every day.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə çoxlu durğunluq və qrammatik səhvlər var. Daha təbii və axıcı danışmaq üçün sözləri təkrarlamamaq, cümlələri tam və aydın qurmaq və əlaqələndirici sözlərdən istifadə etmək vacibdir.

例: Yes, Chinese people often give plants as gifts during festivals or special occasions. For example, during the New Year, they might give money trees or bamboo plants.

× I found umm, uh, pond plants very calming and natural, uh, natural and it's aesthetically suits for me.

✓ I found pond plants very calming and natural, and they aesthetically suit me.

The phrase 'it's aesthetically suits for me' is incorrect. 'It's' is singular, but 'pond plants' is plural, so 'they' should be used. Also, 'suits' should be 'suit' to agree with the plural subject. The preposition 'for' is unnecessary here. The correct phrase is 'they aesthetically suit me.'

× Yes, I grew a cactus when I was a young.

✓ Yes, I grew a cactus when I was young.

The phrase 'a young' is incorrect because 'young' is an adjective and does not need an article. The correct expression is 'when I was young.'

× This plant has a long maintenance and it required little attention.

✓ This plant requires little maintenance and attention.

The phrase 'has a long maintenance' is incorrect. 'Maintenance' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a long.' Also, 'required' is past tense but the sentence is about a general fact, so present tense 'requires' is appropriate.

× As a person like me, it's very useful and it's just my busy.

✓ As a person like me, it is very useful because I am very busy.

The phrase 'it's just my busy' is incorrect. 'My busy' is not a correct expression. The intended meaning is that the plant is useful because the speaker is busy. So, 'because I am very busy' clarifies the meaning.

× I only know that I when you need to water every time as they required and you must take care of it every day.

✓ I only know that you need to water them as required and take care of them every day.

The sentence has unnecessary words like 'I when' and incorrect verb forms 'as they required.' The correct form is 'water them as required' and 'take care of them every day.' Also, 'them' refers to plants (plural).

× Chinese people uh, send a plan as a gift.

✓ Chinese people send plants as gifts.

The word 'plan' is a typo or incorrect; it should be 'plants' (plural) to match the context. Also, 'a gift' should be 'gifts' to agree with plural 'plants.'

× in New Year, Chinese people uh, sent uh, money trees, uh, or bamboo to uh. Their.

✓ At New Year, Chinese people send money trees or bamboo as gifts.

The sentence uses past tense 'sent' but the question is about a general habit, so present tense 'send' is appropriate. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; 'to uh. Their.' is removed and replaced with 'as gifts' for clarity.