Plants— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, 'some plant' nên là 'some plants', 'a small pot plant' nên là 'a small potted plant', và 'feel fresh and live' nên là 'feel fresh and lively'. Ngoài ra, câu cuối không liên quan trực tiếp đến câu hỏi và gây lạc đề, bạn nên tập trung trả lời đúng trọng tâm câu hỏi.

例: Yes, I love nature, so I keep some plants at home. For example, I often decorate my sturdy table with a small potted plant because it makes the room feel fresh and lively.

提案: Bạn cần luyện tập để nói trôi chảy hơn, tránh sử dụng nhiều từ ngập ngừng như 'uh', 'umm'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và có cấu trúc tốt hơn. Ví dụ, 'many types of flower' nên là 'many types of flowers', 'sunflower' nên là 'sunflowers', và câu cuối không rõ nghĩa, cần sửa lại hoặc loại bỏ.

例: When I was young, I used to grow many types of flowers in my garden, especially roses and sunflowers. I loved them because of their bright colors and how they brightened up my home.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'plan' nên là 'plants', 'land' nên là 'plants', 'sun size' nên là 'sunlight', và 'small herds' nên là 'small herbs'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: As a nature lover, I have learned some basic information about growing plants by watching videos on YouTube. For example, I know that plants need enough sunlight, water, and good soil to grow well. I enjoy trying to grow small herbs at home because it helps me relax and connect with nature.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'plans escape' nên là 'plants as gifts', 'land' nên là 'plants', 'roses usually some blind' nên là 'roses usually symbolize', và câu cuối nên sửa lại để rõ nghĩa.

例: Yes, many Chinese people often send plants as gifts to their loved ones because plants have special meanings. For example, roses usually symbolize love and affection, so they are a popular choice. I think giving plants is a thoughtful way to express feelings and care.

× Yes, I love nature, so I keep some plant at home.

✓ Yes, I love nature, so I keep some plants at home.

The word 'plant' should be plural 'plants' because 'some' indicates more than one. In English, countable nouns after 'some' are plural.

× Having friends around also help me feel relaxed after a busy day.

✓ Having friends around also helps me feel relaxed after a busy day.

The verb 'help' must agree with the singular subject 'Having friends around' (treated as singular), so it should be 'helps'.

× Back in the day I used to grow many types of flower in my garden, especially roses and sunflower.

✓ Back in the day I used to grow many types of flowers in my garden, especially roses and sunflowers.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because 'many types of' refers to multiple kinds. Also, 'sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers' to match 'roses'.

× Uh, I love it because of their bright and color in the way they brighten up my home.

✓ Uh, I love it because of their brightness and color in the way they brighten up my home.

The adjective 'bright' should be changed to the noun 'brightness' to correctly pair with 'color' as nouns in the phrase.

× However, today I have a tendency to umm, plan umm, some, some more uh, part parties friend.

✓ However, today I tend to plant some more potted plants.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Have a tendency to' should be followed by a verb in base form 'plant'. 'Part parties friend' is unclear and likely a mishearing; 'potted plants' fits context.

× Umm, as a nature lover, I have learned some basic information about growing plan by watching video on YouTube.

✓ Umm, as a nature lover, I have learned some basic information about growing plants by watching videos on YouTube.

'Plan' should be plural 'plants' as the topic is about growing plants. 'Video' should be plural 'videos' because 'some' implies more than one.

× For example, I note that land needs enough sun size, water and good soil to grow well.

✓ For example, I note that plants need enough sunlight, water, and good soil to grow well.

'Land' is incorrect; it should be 'plants' as the subject. 'Sun size' is incorrect; the correct term is 'sunlight'. Also, 'plants need' is correct subject-verb agreement.

× I enjoy trying to grow small herds at home because help me relax and connect with nature.

✓ I enjoy trying to grow small herbs at home because they help me relax and connect with nature.

'Herds' is incorrect; the correct word is 'herbs'. Also, 'help me' needs a subject 'they' to be grammatically correct.

× Yes, many Chinese people often send plans escape to their loved ones because land has special meaning, for example roses usually some blind for love and affection, so they are popular choice.

✓ Yes, many Chinese people often send plants as gifts to their loved ones because plants have special meaning; for example, roses usually symbolize love and affection, so they are a popular choice.

'Plans escape' is incorrect; it should be 'plants as gifts'. 'Land' should be 'plants'. 'Some blind' is incorrect; the correct word is 'symbolize'. Also, 'popular choice' needs the article 'a'.

× I give in. I think giving friends is a tough way to spread feeling and so care.

✓ I agree. I think giving plants to friends is a thoughtful way to spread feelings and show care.

'I give in' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I agree'. 'Giving friends' is incomplete; it should be 'giving plants to friends'. 'Tough way' is incorrect; 'thoughtful way' fits the context. 'Spread feeling and so care' should be 'spread feelings and show care'.