Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答缺乏连贯性和清晰的表达，建议直接回答问题，使用简单明了的句子，并用具体理由支持你的观点。避免使用不相关或不清楚的词汇。

例: My favorite colour is blue because it reminds me of the ocean and the sky, which make me feel calm and peaceful.

提案: 回答不够明确，表达混乱。建议直接说明你不喜欢的颜色，并给出具体原因，使用完整句子和连贯的表达。

例: I don't dislike any colour because I believe every colour has its own beauty and suits different people.

提案: 回答不完整且不连贯。建议明确说明朋友喜欢的颜色，并解释原因，使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词。

例: My friends mostly like black because they think it is very stylish and easy to match with other clothes.

提案: 回答不清楚且不完整。建议明确指出让你不舒服的颜色，并说明原因，使用完整且连贯的句子。

例: Yellow makes me uncomfortable in my room because it is too bright and makes it hard to relax.

× My color is definitely blue because firstly, what words in my language means slow in English? And 2nd blooming. So come down and the ocean this guy.

✓ My favorite color is definitely blue because, firstly, the word in my language means 'slow' in English, and secondly, 'blooming'. So, it reminds me of the ocean and this guy.

句子结构混乱，缺少连贯性，导致表达不清晰。建议理清句子逻辑，使用连接词使句子连贯。

× I think, I think there's no colorized ease like because I think every color in the natural is. And I think the suits and the sale of people.

✓ I think there is no color I dislike because every color is natural, and I think they suit different people.

句子结构不完整，表达不清楚。需要简化句子，去除多余重复部分，使意思明确。

× Like the color and. Even though the fasting color because she thinks it is very stylish and. It's.

✓ My friend likes the color red. Even though it's a fast color, she thinks it is very stylish.

句子不完整，缺少主语和谓语，导致意思不明。建议补充完整句子，确保主谓一致。

× I sing, play some get yellow prints. In my room. Because I think it's. To put this color in my.

✓ I have some yellow prints in my room because I think it's nice to have this color there.

句子断裂，缺少必要成分，导致表达不完整。建议合并句子，补充缺失部分，使句子完整。