Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural by using correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, be more specific about why you like blue, and organize your ideas logically using linking words.

例: My favorite colour is blue because it makes me feel calm and focused. For example, I often choose blue books and stationery because the colour helps me concentrate better.

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly state the colour you dislike and explain why with specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I dislike very bright colours because they can be too intense, especially during the hot summer season. For instance, bright yellow can feel overwhelming in the heat.

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand due to incomplete sentences and unclear ideas. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: Most of my friends like green because it matches our school uniform. Additionally, green reminds us of nature and greenery, which makes it a popular choice among us.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state which colour makes you uncomfortable and explain why, using proper sentence structure and linking words.

例: Dark colours in my room make me feel uncomfortable because they strain my eyes and make the space feel gloomy. Therefore, I prefer lighter colours that create a more pleasant atmosphere.

× my favorite color is a blue

✓ my favorite color is blue

The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the uncountable noun 'blue' when referring to a color. Colors do not require an article in this context.

× Blue is my favorite color because it is showing me a calmness and focus is I every time I am purchasing the book like blue color and stationary book and stationary like blue color choosing everything in blue.

✓ Blue is my favorite color because it gives me calmness and focus. Every time I purchase a book or stationery, I choose blue color for everything.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper sentence structure. 'It is showing me a calmness' is incorrect; 'it gives me calmness' is appropriate. Also, 'stationary' should be 'stationery' (writing materials). The sentence is split for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I like it all the color but one color is like a high brightness color is I don't like this because it is not good for the summer hottest season.

✓ I like all colors except one, which is a very bright color. I don't like it because it is not good for the hot summer season.

The phrase 'I like it all the color' is incorrect; 'I like all colors' is correct. 'High brightness color' should be 'very bright color'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Mostly my friend is. Like a green color because it is it is a matching to our school uniform.

✓ Most of my friends like green because it matches our school uniform.

'Mostly my friend is' is incorrect; 'Most of my friends' is correct for plural. 'Like a green color' should be 'like green'. 'It is a matching' should be 'it matches' for subject-verb agreement.

× So green color is very favorite in my friend becauses showing to the greenery.

✓ So green is very popular among my friends because it represents greenery.

'Very favorite in my friend' is incorrect; 'very popular among my friends' is correct. 'Becauses showing to the greenery' is unclear; 'because it represents greenery' is appropriate.

× So it is attracted to the ice and folks for folks in to the. Uh.

✓ This sentence is unclear and incomplete; it should be omitted or clarified.

The sentence is incomplete and does not convey a clear meaning, so it cannot be corrected without additional context.

× Now very dark color is I feel uncomfortable in my room because of it is attractive to my eyes and.

✓ Now, very dark colors make me feel uncomfortable in my room because they strain my eyes.

'Very dark color is I feel uncomfortable' is incorrect; 'very dark colors make me feel uncomfortable' is correct. 'It is attractive to my eyes' is incorrect; 'they strain my eyes' is appropriate.

× In the room so please not good for me.

✓ So, it is not good for me in the room.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Reordering the words creates a complete and clear sentence.

× I'm don't like this type of brightness colors.

✓ I don't like this type of bright colors.

'I'm don't like' is incorrect; 'I don't like' is correct. 'Brightness colors' should be 'bright colors' to correctly use the adjective form.