Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but contains a grammatical error and could be more natural. Use 'because' instead of 'becauses' and add a linking phrase to enrich your response. For example, you can say why you feel connected to blue.

例: My favorite colour is blue because it represents the sky and the sea, which make me feel calm and peaceful.

提案: Your answer is confusing and has grammatical mistakes. Try to be clear and direct. Use linking words to explain your reasons logically and avoid redundancy. Also, check your vocabulary and sentence structure.

例: I dislike black and red because black often represents danger and darkness, which makes me feel uneasy.

提案: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and could be more fluent. Use plural forms correctly and add linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: My friends like different colours. For example, one friend likes red, while another prefers pink. I think their choices depend on their personalities and how they perceive each colour.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors and some redundancy. Use correct verb agreement and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also, try to link your ideas clearly.

例: Darker colours make me uncomfortable in my room because they reduce the overall light. For instance, red or black walls can make the room feel dim and gloomy.

× My favorite color is blue becauses it represents the sky and the sea.

✓ My favorite color is blue because it represents the sky and the sea.

The word 'becauses' is incorrect; the correct conjunction is 'because' to show reason or cause.

× I dislike black and red and most of them I like.

✓ I dislike black and red, but I like most other colors.

The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper conjunctions and structure. Adding 'but' and rephrasing clarifies the contrast between disliked and liked colors.

× Read better than black because black is a very dangerous color and sometime darkness represents black.

✓ Red is better than black because black is a very dangerous color and sometimes darkness represents black.

The word 'Read' is a typo and should be 'Red'. Also, 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. The sentence needed correction for clarity and grammar.

× My friend like different kinds of colors.

✓ My friends like different kinds of colors.

The subject 'friend' is singular but the verb 'like' is plural. Changing 'friend' to plural 'friends' matches the plural verb 'like'.

× One of my friend likes red color and the other one likes pink.

✓ One of my friends likes red color and the other one likes pink.

'One of my friend' should be 'One of my friends' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun.

× It depends on their own personality and how they think about a single color.

✓ It depends on their personalities and how they think about a single color.

Since 'their' refers to multiple friends, 'personality' should be plural 'personalities' to agree in number.

× The colors that are darker in shade makes me unconfortable becaused.

✓ The colors that are darker in shade make me uncomfortable because.

The subject 'colors' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also, 'unconfortable' is misspelled; correct spelling is 'uncomfortable'. 'Becaused' is incorrect; correct word is 'because'.

× Darker colors dims the overall light of the room.

✓ Darker colors dim the overall light of the room.

'Colors' is plural, so the verb should be 'dim' not 'dims'.