Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to provide more detailed reasons why you like the color black to make your answer more natural and effective. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid simple repetition.

例: My favorite color is black because it looks elegant and versatile. For example, I often wear black clothes as they match well with other colors and suit many occasions.

提案: Avoid uncertainty and try to give a clear opinion with reasons. Use linking words to explain your dislike and provide specific details to enrich your answer.

例: I dislike pink because I find it too bright and feminine for my taste. Moreover, I think it doesn't suit my personality, so I prefer to avoid it.

提案: Try to answer the question directly even if you are unsure. You can speculate or give examples to show your ability to develop ideas and use linking words.

例: Although I'm not sure, I think my friends like blue and green the most because these colors are calming and popular among young people.

提案: Avoid hesitation and provide a clear answer with reasons. Use linking words to organize your ideas and give specific details about why certain colors make you uncomfortable.

例: The color red makes me uncomfortable in my room because it is too intense and can cause restlessness. In contrast, I prefer softer colors like blue or beige for a relaxing atmosphere.

× I dislike maybe pink.

✓ I maybe dislike pink.

The original sentence has an awkward word order. In English, adverbs like 'maybe' usually come before the verb or at the beginning of the sentence. Placing 'maybe' before 'dislike' improves clarity and naturalness.

× I don't, I don't know why.

✓ I don't know why.

The repetition of 'I don't' is unnecessary and creates redundancy. Removing the first 'I don't' makes the sentence grammatically correct and clearer.

× I don't know, maybe green or pink or. Red.

✓ I don't know, maybe green, pink, or red.

The original sentence has an incorrect punctuation and conjunction usage. The period after 'or' is incorrect, and the list should be separated by commas with 'or' before the last item. Correcting the punctuation and conjunction improves sentence flow and clarity.