Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có nội dung rõ ràng, tuy nhiên bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời chính xác hơn, ví dụ như 'personalities' nên là 'personality' và tránh lỗi số nhiều không phù hợp. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: My favorite color is blue because it reminds me of the sky and the ocean, which I find very calming and peaceful. Therefore, I often choose blue clothes as they suit my personality and help me feel relaxed.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và lựa chọn từ chính xác hơn. Từ 'flight' có thể là lỗi nghe hoặc viết sai, có thể bạn muốn nói 'white'. Câu trả lời cũng không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh dùng những cụm từ không phù hợp hoặc không rõ nghĩa.

例: I don't like the color white because it reminds me of some unpleasant occasions, and it often symbolizes bad luck in my culture.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và số ít (friends, tends, chooses), cũng như chọn từ phù hợp ('frightened' không đúng nghĩa, có thể bạn muốn nói 'bright'). Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn bằng cách sử dụng liên từ và cấu trúc câu hợp lý.

例: My friends tend to prefer bright colors like blue and red because these shades are lovely and uplifting. For example, one of my friends always chooses blue clothes because they make her feel calm and confident.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'create' nên là 'creates', và các từ như 'tired, tireless' không phù hợp với ngữ cảnh. Ngoài ra, câu cuối không rõ nghĩa ('space mean for election'). Bạn nên dùng từ chính xác và câu đơn giản, dễ hiểu.

例: I find purple quite uncomfortable in my room because it is a very intense color that can make me feel tired or even a bit aggressive, which is not ideal for a relaxing space.

× I often choose blue clothes because it suits my personalities and make me feel relaxed.

✓ I often choose blue clothes because they suit my personality and make me feel relaxed.

The word 'clothes' is plural, so the pronoun and verb should agree in number. 'It suits my personalities' is incorrect because 'personalities' should be singular 'personality' to match the context. Also, 'make' should be 'make' because the subject is plural 'clothes'.

× Well I personally don't like the flight because it's always reminds me of mayonnaise obsessed occasions and it's also the symbol of the unfortunate of the unfortunate.

✓ Well, I personally don't like the white because it always reminds me of mayonnaise-obsessed occasions and it's also the symbol of the unfortunate.

The word 'flight' is likely a typo for 'white'. 'It's always reminds' is incorrect; 'reminds' should not be preceded by 'always' with 'it's'. The phrase 'mayonnaise obsessed occasions' needs a hyphen to form a compound adjective 'mayonnaise-obsessed'. The repeated phrase 'of the unfortunate of the unfortunate' is redundant and should be corrected to 'of the unfortunate'.

× Well, my friend tend to prefer bright and frightened colors like blue and red because these shades are lovely and uplifting.

✓ Well, my friends tend to prefer bright and vibrant colors like blue and red because these shades are lovely and uplifting.

'My friend' is singular but the verb 'tend' is plural, so it should be 'my friends'. 'Frightened colors' is incorrect; likely intended 'vibrant colors'.

× For example, my one of my friends always choose blue clothes as it make her feel her calm and confident.

✓ For example, one of my friends always chooses blue clothes as it makes her feel calm and confident.

'My one of my friends' is redundant; 'one of my friends' is correct. 'Choose' should be 'chooses' to agree with singular subject 'one'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Her calm and confident' is incorrect; 'her' before adjectives is unnecessary.

× I find the purple quite uncomfortable in my room.

✓ I find purple quite uncomfortable in my room.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before color names when speaking generally.

× This color is very intense and create feelings of of tired, tireless or even aggressions which is not ideal for space mean for election.

✓ This color is very intense and creates feelings of tiredness, restlessness, or even aggression, which is not ideal for a space meant for relaxation.

'Create' should be 'creates' to agree with singular subject 'color'. 'Feelings of of tired' has a repeated 'of' and 'tired' should be a noun form 'tiredness'. 'Tireless' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'restlessness'. 'Aggressions' should be singular 'aggression'. 'Space mean for election' is incorrect; should be 'space meant for relaxation'.