Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid repeating the same information and expand your answer with reasons or feelings about the colour. This will make your response more natural and effective.

例: My favorite colour is blue because it reminds me of the sky and the sea, which makes me feel calm and relaxed.

提案: You should answer the question directly instead of asking the examiner. Also, provide a reason for your dislike to enrich your answer.

例: I dislike the colour brown because it looks dull and makes me feel a bit gloomy.

提案: Make sure to answer the question clearly and use correct vocabulary. 'Cheese' is not a colour. Also, add some details about why your friends like those colours.

例: My friends like yellow and green the most because yellow is bright and cheerful, while green reminds them of nature.

提案: Answer the question directly by stating which colour makes you uncomfortable and explain why. Also, avoid repetition and grammatical errors.

例: The colour red in my room makes me uncomfortable because it is too intense and makes it hard to relax.

× Do you?

✓ I dislike green.

The student's response 'Do you?' is a question and does not answer the examiner's question about the colour they dislike. This is a sentence structure error because the response does not fit the expected answer format. The student should provide a statement indicating the colour they dislike.

× My friends like yellow and cheese.

✓ My friends like yellow and blue.

The student incorrectly uses 'cheese' which is a noun unrelated to colours. This is a vocabulary misuse rather than a grammar problem, but to fit the context, the student should mention colours. Replacing 'cheese' with a colour like 'blue' corrects the sentence.

× My my color in my room is yellow and red.

✓ The colors in my room are yellow and red.

The sentence has a repeated word 'my' and uses singular 'color' with two colours, which is incorrect. The sentence structure is faulty. Correcting the repetition and using plural 'colors' with plural verb 'are' fixes the sentence.