Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer should be more natural and clear. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your ideas. For example, explain why red feels energetic and sexy to you in a coherent way.

例: My favorite color is red because it feels energetic and passionate. I like how it stands out and gives a lively vibe.

提案: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. Also, use more appropriate vocabulary instead of 'tifty' and explain your reasons clearly.

例: I dislike brown because it looks dull and unclean to me. Moreover, I feel that brown does not suit my complexion, so I avoid wearing it.

提案: Make your answer more concise and coherent by avoiding repetition and using linking words. Also, try to provide a possible reason or example to support your statement.

例: Most of my friends prefer black, possibly because it is popular in Georgia. For example, many people wear black clothes as it is considered stylish and versatile.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and coherence. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain why dark colors make you uncomfortable. Also, avoid repetition and be specific.

例: I don't like dark colors in my room because they make the space feel gloomy. For instance, I avoid black, brown, and dark green since I prefer light colors that create a bright and comfortable atmosphere.

× My favorite color is red because I like this is more energetic and very sexy and I like that.

✓ My favorite color is red because I think it is more energetic and very sexy, and I like that.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used to refer to 'red'. The correct pronoun is 'it' to refer back to a singular noun. Also, the sentence structure was unclear and needed rephrasing for clarity.

× I don't like brown because I think brown is not a clean color. I think this is a very tifty color and.

✓ I don't like brown because I think brown is not a clean color. I think it is a very dirty color.

The word 'tifty' is incorrect; the intended adjective is 'dirty'. Also, 'this' should be replaced with 'it' to correctly refer to 'brown'. The sentence was incomplete and needed correction.

× And why I don't like one big reason is that in my face I think brown is not good.

✓ And the main reason I don't like it is that I think brown does not look good on my face.

The sentence had incorrect pronoun use and awkward structure. 'One big reason' should be 'the main reason', and 'brown is not good' should be clarified as 'brown does not look good on my face'. Also, 'in my face' is incorrect preposition usage.

× My friends like like most black maybe because we are Georgians and in Georgia many people like black color.

✓ My friends like black the most, maybe because we are Georgians and in Georgia many people like the color black.

The phrase 'like like most black' is incorrect; it should be 'like black the most'. Also, 'black color' should be 'the color black' for correct noun phrase structure.

× I don't know the the reason but everyone like black color and they wear.

✓ I don't know the reason, but everyone likes the color black and wears it.

The sentence had repeated words ('the the'), subject-verb agreement errors ('everyone like' should be 'everyone likes'), and incomplete sentence structure. 'They wear' needs an object, so 'it' is added referring to 'the color black'.

× In my room I would not like every dark color because I like more more light colors.

✓ In my room, I do not like any dark colors because I prefer lighter colors.

'Would not like every dark color' is incorrect; 'do not like any dark colors' is appropriate. Also, 'like more more light colors' is redundant and unclear; 'prefer lighter colors' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× I don't like black, brown, maybe dark green because I I like that.

✓ I don't like black, brown, or maybe dark green because I don't like them.

The sentence had repetition ('I I') and unclear pronoun reference ('that'). Using 'them' correctly refers to the plural colors mentioned. Also, 'or' is added for correct listing.