Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and slight awkwardness in phrasing. For example, 'My favorite colour are' should be 'My favorite colours are'. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'bright colours' and 'versatile' multiple times. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly, such as 'because' and 'which'.

例: My favourite colours are blue and white because they are bright and versatile. I especially like wearing white since it symbolizes victory and pairs well with colours like gold or black. These colours make me feel confident and comfortable in various situations.

提案: Your answer has some confusion between 'blood' and 'black' colours, which affects clarity. Also, the phrase 'black itself usually absorbs hate' is unclear and unnatural. Try to be more precise and use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. Avoid mixing unrelated ideas in one sentence.

例: The colour I dislike is black because, in my country, it symbolizes sadness and hopelessness. Additionally, wearing black sometimes makes me feel uncomfortable and less confident.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors such as 'they matches' instead of 'they match' and awkward phrasing like 'they feel their bright colors'. Try to use clearer expressions and correct verb agreement. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: My friends prefer pink and white because these bright colours are versatile. They match well with many other colours like black and gold, which makes my friends feel comfortable and confident in any situation.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. The phrase 'You really find luck in my room' is confusing and likely incorrect. Also, 'it's usually absorbs things' is grammatically wrong. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to explain why black makes you uncomfortable. Avoid vague statements.

例: The colour black makes me uncomfortable in my room because it tends to absorb heat, which makes sleeping difficult, especially during hot weather. Therefore, I prefer bright colours that help me feel comfortable and confident in my room.

× My favorite colour are actually blue and white because they are bright colours and also versatile.

✓ My favorite colours are actually blue and white because they are bright colours and also versatile.

The subject 'My favorite colour' is singular, but the sentence refers to two colours, so it should be plural 'colours' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. This corrects the singular and plural agreement.

× I like wearing white especially as it symbolises victory and it pairs with any colors like gold or black.

✓ I like wearing white especially as it symbolises victory and it pairs with any colour like gold or black.

In Canadian English, 'colour' is the correct spelling. Also, 'any colours like gold or black' is better expressed as 'any colour like gold or black' to indicate any one colour from the examples given.

× These colors make me feel confident and comfortable in different situations.

✓ These colours make me feel confident and comfortable in different situations.

In Canadian English, 'colours' is the correct spelling. This correction aligns with Canadian English conventions.

× The color I dislike is blood because in my country black symbolizes sadness or hopelessness, and black itself usually absorbs hate, so wearing black sometimes makes me uncomfortable and unconfident.

✓ The colour I dislike is black because in my country black symbolises sadness or hopelessness, and black itself usually absorbs hate, so wearing black sometimes makes me uncomfortable and unconfident.

The original sentence incorrectly says 'The color I dislike is blood' but the context is about the colour black. Also, 'color' should be 'colour' and 'symbolizes' should be 'symbolises' in Canadian English. Correcting the colour name and spelling improves clarity and correctness.

× My friends also prefer pink and white because they feel their bright colors and also versatile.

✓ My friends also prefer pink and white because they feel their bright colours are also versatile.

The sentence lacks a verb after 'bright colours' to connect the ideas. Adding 'are' corrects the sentence structure and clarifies the meaning. Also, 'colors' should be 'colours' in Canadian English.

× They matches with any many other colors like black and gold and it makes them feel comfortable and confident in every situation.

✓ They match with many other colours like black and gold and it makes them feel comfortable and confident in every situation.

The subject 'They' is plural, so the verb should be 'match' not 'matches'. Also, 'any many other colors' is incorrect; it should be 'many other colours'. Correcting these errors improves subject-verb agreement and quantifier usage.

× The color that makes me uncomfortable in my room is black.

✓ The colour that makes me uncomfortable in my room is black.

'Color' should be spelled 'colour' in Canadian English to maintain consistency.

× You really find luck in my room because it's usually absorbs things which make you uncomfortable when sleeping or during the hot weather.

✓ You don't really find luck in my room because it usually absorbs things which make you uncomfortable when sleeping or during hot weather.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'It's usually absorbs' is incorrect; 'it usually absorbs' is correct. Also, 'You really find luck' contradicts the intended meaning; adding 'don't' clarifies the negative meaning. Removing 'the' before 'hot weather' is also appropriate.

× I usually prefer bright colors which makes me comfortable and confident in my room.

✓ I usually prefer bright colours which make me comfortable and confident in my room.

The relative pronoun 'which' refers to 'bright colours' (plural), so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'. Also, 'colors' should be 'colours' in Canadian English.