Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e beshi specific hote paren ebong sentence gulo ke aro natural ebong shothik vabe structure korte paren. Apnar answer e 'cozy' word ta bhalo, kintu 'I also like white colour' ta onekta unrelated mone hocche. Apni ekta main topic e focus korun ebong supporting details diye answer ke boro korun.

例: My favorite colour is black because it feels cozy and elegant. I also appreciate white for its simplicity and brightness, which contrasts nicely with black.

提案: Apnar answer e grammar ebong sentence structure improve kora dorkar. Apni clear vabe bolte paren keno apni oi colour gulo pochondo koren na. Linking words use kore sentence gulo ke logical banan.

例: I dislike purple and yellow because when I wear these colours, I feel uncomfortable. They don't suit me well, so I prefer to avoid them.

提案: Apnar answer e clarity ebong coherence er dorkar ache. Apni ekta specific friend er kotha bolte paren, tarpor tar favourite colour ebong karon bolte paren. Linking words use korun ebong unnecessary repetition avoid korun.

例: Most of my friends prefer black as their favourite colour. For example, my close friend always wears black because it makes him feel comfortable and confident.

提案: Apnar answer e sentence structure ebong grammar improve kora dorkar. Apni clear vabe bolte paren keno black colour apnar room e comfortable na. Supporting details diye answer ke boro korun.

例: The colour black makes me uncomfortable in my room because it is too dark and does not match the environment. Instead, I prefer white as it brightens up the space and feels more welcoming.

× This color when I use this color suits uh, I uncomfortable feel.

✓ When I use this color, I feel uncomfortable.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has an unclear structure. 'I uncomfortable feel' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I feel uncomfortable'. Also, the sentence needs reordering for clarity.

× I do uncomfortable feel, so I don't like this color.

✓ I feel uncomfortable, so I don't like this color.

The phrase 'I do uncomfortable feel' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'I feel uncomfortable'. The auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary here.

× Most of the time my friends used to black color.

✓ Most of the time, my friends use black color.

The phrase 'used to black color' is incorrect. 'Used to' implies past habit and is not followed by a noun directly. The correct present tense is 'use black color'.

× I hate his favorite color is black.

✓ I hate that his favorite color is black.

The sentence lacks a conjunction to connect the clauses. Adding 'that' clarifies the meaning.

× He is always used to black.

✓ He always uses black.

'Used to' is incorrectly used here. 'Used to' indicates past habits and should be followed by a verb in base form. The correct present tense is 'He always uses black'.

× It is a it is his comfortable feel.

✓ It is comfortable for him.

The phrase 'his comfortable feel' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'comfortable for him'.

× It is give him comfortable.

✓ It makes him comfortable.

The phrase 'It is give him comfortable' is grammatically incorrect. The correct form is 'It makes him comfortable'.

× My room uncomfortable makes this color black.

✓ This color black makes my room uncomfortable.

The original sentence has incorrect word order. The subject and object positions need to be switched for clarity.

× It's a don't match my environment.

✓ It doesn't match my environment.

The phrase 'It's a don't match' is incorrect. The correct negative form is 'It doesn't match'.