Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cavabınızda daha təbii ifadələrdən istifadə edin və cümlələri daha axıcı edin. Məsələn, rəngləri sadalamaq əvəzinə, birini seçib səbəbini izah edin. Həmçinin, cümlə quruluşunu sadə və aydın saxlayın.

例: My favorite colors are blue and red because blue reminds me of the sky, and red is very vibrant and energetic.

提案: Qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin və ifadələrinizi daha təbii edin. Məsələn, 'it don't sit on me' əvəzinə 'it doesn't suit me' deyin. Həmçinin, səbəbi daha aydın və spesifik izah edin.

例: I dislike orange because I don't think it suits me, and it makes me feel uncomfortable.

提案: Cümlələrinizdə cinsə uyğun əvəzliklərdən istifadə edin və fikirlərinizi daha aydın ifadə edin. Məsələn, 'his' əvəzinə 'her' istifadə edin. Həmçinin, rənglər haqqında fikrinizi daha məntiqli və təbii şəkildə ifadə edin.

例: My best friend Sarah likes red and white. I personally think white is more of a neutral shade than a color, but she really likes it.

提案: Cümlələrinizi daha qısa və aydın edin, qrammatik səhvləri düzəldin. Məsələn, 'this colour make me feel bad' əvəzinə 'this colour makes me feel uncomfortable' deyin. Həmçinin, fikirlərinizi daha məntiqli ardıcıllıqla təqdim edin.

例: As I mentioned before, orange makes me feel uncomfortable in my room. Also, I don't like wearing white dresses because I think this color doesn't suit my body shape.

× I can't make a choice between. Blue and red, but I can say that these two are my favorite.

✓ I can't make a choice between blue and red, but I can say that these two are my favorites.

The sentence has an incorrect period placement causing a sentence fragment. Also, 'favorite' should be plural 'favorites' because it refers to two colors. The corrected sentence combines the fragment and uses the plural form correctly.

× I dislike orange because I think it don't sit on me.

✓ I dislike orange because I think it doesn't suit me.

The subject 'it' requires the third person singular verb form 'doesn't' instead of 'don't'. Also, 'sit on me' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'suit me' meaning the color looks good on the person.

× And as an additional I can say that this color give me bad sense.

✓ Additionally, I can say that this color gives me a bad feeling.

Starting a sentence with 'And as an additional' is awkward; 'Additionally' is more appropriate. 'Give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'color'. 'Bad sense' is unnatural; 'bad feeling' is better.

× My best friend is Sarah and in my opinion his favorite colors are red or white.

✓ My best friend is Sarah and in my opinion her favorite colors are red or white.

The pronoun 'his' is incorrect because Sarah is female; it should be 'her' to match the gender of the subject.

× Actually, I don't think white is a color, but I want to say it.

✓ Actually, I don't think white is a color, but I want to mention it.

The phrase 'I want to say it' is awkward; 'I want to mention it' is more natural in this context.

× And as I mentioned it after, the colour of orange makes me uncomfortable because this colour make me feel bad.

✓ As I mentioned before, the color orange makes me uncomfortable because this color makes me feel bad.

'And as I mentioned it after' is incorrect; 'As I mentioned before' is the correct phrase. 'Colour of orange' should be 'color orange'. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'color'.

× As addition I can say white in dresses because I think this colour don't sit to shape of my body.

✓ In addition, I can say white in dresses because I think this color doesn't suit the shape of my body.

'As addition' is incorrect; 'In addition' is correct. 'Don't sit to shape' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'doesn't suit the shape'. Also, 'colour' and 'color' should be consistent; here 'color' is used.