Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answerは自然ですが、"make place clean and bright"の部分は文法的に不自然です。より具体的な表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめると良いでしょう。例えば、"white makes places look clean and bright, like streets or buildings"のように。

例: My favorite color is white because it symbolizes innocence and purity. Additionally, white makes places look clean and bright, such as streets and buildings.

提案: 答えが不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。"bad wives"や"order it"は意味が通じません。質問に直接答え、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。

例: I dislike the color black because I feel it brings bad luck, especially when I wear it to important events.

提案: 文法と語彙の誤りが目立ちます。"every clothes"は"all her clothes"、"want to have black walls"は"wants black walls"に修正しましょう。また、"fascinating"の使い方が不適切です。

例: My friend's favorite color is black. She wears all her clothes in black and even wants black walls in her room. She is very fascinated by the color black, but I find it quite contrasting.

提案: 答えが不明瞭で意味が伝わりにくいです。"dark contrast MMM"や"D detergent my energy"は意味不明です。簡潔で明確な表現を心がけましょう。

例: Dark colors like black and dark brown make me uncomfortable in my room. They drain my energy and create a gloomy atmosphere.

× I also like how white can make place clean and bright, especially street or building.

✓ I also like how white can make a place clean and bright, especially streets or buildings.

The sentence lacks the indefinite article 'a' before 'place' and uses singular 'street' and 'building' where plural forms 'streets' and 'buildings' are appropriate to generalize. Using correct quantifiers and articles improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× They're not just colors that I dislike, but one of the most unfavorable color is black.

✓ They're not just colors that I dislike, but one of the most unfavorable colors is black.

The phrase 'one of the most unfavorable color' should use the plural 'colors' because 'one of the' refers to a member of a group, which must be plural. This is a common singular and plural agreement issue.

× I think is gives me bad wives if I order it and go to the some good occasion.

✓ I think it gives me bad vibes if I wear it and go to some good occasions.

The sentence has multiple errors: missing subject 'it' before 'gives', incorrect word 'wives' instead of 'vibes', wrong verb 'order' instead of 'wear', and incorrect article 'the' before 'some good occasion'. Correct pronoun use and vocabulary are essential for clarity.

× Well, my friend's favorite color is black.

✓ Well, my friends' favorite color is black.

If referring to multiple friends, the possessive should be plural 'friends''. If only one friend, original is correct. Context suggests multiple friends, so plural possessive is appropriate.

× She used to wear every clothes in black and even want to have black walls in her room.

✓ She used to wear all clothes in black and even wants to have black walls in her room.

'Every clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and uncountable in this context; 'all clothes' is correct. Also, 'want' should be 'wants' to agree with third person singular subject.

× She used to wear every clothes in black and even want to have black walls in her room.

✓ She used to wear all clothes in black and even wants to have black walls in her room.

The verb 'want' must be conjugated as 'wants' to agree with the third person singular subject 'She'.

× She's so much fascinating about the color black, but I don't know why I find it quite contrast.

✓ She's so fascinated by the color black, but I don't know why I find it quite contrasting.

'So much fascinating' is incorrect; 'so fascinated' is the correct adjective form. 'Quite contrast' is incorrect; 'quite contrasting' is the proper adjective form to describe the effect.

× She's so much fascinating about the color black, but I don't know why I find it quite contrast.

✓ She's so fascinated by the color black, but I don't know why I find it quite contrasting.

The preposition 'about' should be 'by' after 'fascinated'. Also, 'contrast' should be 'contrasting' to function as an adjective.

× Well, the color which has dark contrast MMM such as the black or the dark brown.

✓ Well, the colors which have dark contrast, such as black or dark brown.

'The color' should be plural 'colors' to match 'such as black or dark brown'. Also, 'the black' and 'the dark brown' are incorrect; colors generally do not take 'the' unless specific. 'MMM' seems to be a filler and should be omitted.

× They are unfavorable to me.

✓ They are unfavorable to me.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.

× They make me very uncomfortable and I feel like it D detergent my energy when I live in such room.

✓ They make me very uncomfortable and I feel like they drain my energy when I live in such a room.

'It D detergent' is incorrect; likely intended 'they drain'. Also, 'such room' needs the article 'a' to be grammatically correct. Pronouns must agree in number with their antecedents.