Colours— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
What's your favorite colour?
受験者
I have three favorite colors. I like orange, green, and purple, but I prefer to wear black because it is elegant and it goes with everything. I like cream because it makes me think of nature. I like orange because I like sunset and purple because it is a beautiful color.
試験官
What's the colour you dislike? Why?
受験者
Neon colors are not my favorite because they are too bright and make me feel uncomfortable and maybe because they don't match with my personality because I am a calm person. I like soft and simple things.
試験官
What colours do your friends like most?
受験者
I don't have closer friends actually, but if I have some I don't know about their personal things so if I can talk about my sisters or my cousins. They like mostly soft and calming colors like me. My sister like white a lot.
試験官
What colour makes you uncomfortable in your room?
受験者
I don't have a color like that because I love all the colors, but if I talk about my wearing, I can't wear orange outside because it makes me feel uncomfortable. I like to wear soft and simple colors outside.
評価
総合
Part 1
What's your favorite colour?
スコア: 75.0提案: Votre réponse est un peu longue et manque de structure claire. Essayez de commencer par une phrase principale claire, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques en utilisant des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus cohérente et naturelle.
例: My favorite color is black because it is elegant and versatile. Additionally, I like cream as it reminds me of nature, and orange because it resembles a beautiful sunset.
What's the colour you dislike? Why?
スコア: 80.0提案: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être améliorée en utilisant des mots de liaison pour mieux structurer vos idées et en évitant les répétitions pour plus d'efficacité.
例: I dislike neon colors because they are too bright and make me feel uncomfortable. Moreover, they don't suit my calm personality, as I prefer soft and simple colors.
What colours do your friends like most?
スコア: 65.0提案: Votre réponse manque de clarté et de structure. Il serait préférable de répondre directement à la question, puis d'ajouter des détails spécifiques avec des mots de liaison pour améliorer la cohérence.
例: I don't have close friends to ask, but my sisters and cousins prefer soft and calming colors. For example, my sister likes white a lot because it feels peaceful.
What colour makes you uncomfortable in your room?
スコア: 70.0提案: Votre réponse est un peu confuse car elle mélange deux idées différentes. Essayez de répondre directement à la question et d'utiliser des mots de liaison pour clarifier votre réponse.
例: No color in my room makes me uncomfortable because I like all colors. However, I avoid wearing orange outside since it makes me feel uneasy; I prefer soft and simple colors instead.
文法
× My sister like white a lot.
✓ My sister likes white a lot.
The subject 'My sister' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'likes' to agree with the subject. This is a subject-verb agreement issue related to singular and plural forms.
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