Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to use correct sentence structures and avoid redundancy. Also, clarify your ideas and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, explain why green makes you feel energized and describe the shades more clearly.

例: My favorite colour is green because it comes in many beautiful shades. For instance, light green feels fresh and calming, while dark green is rich and soothing. I find green energizes me and reminds me of nature, which makes me feel relaxed and happy.

提案: Your answer is a bit confusing and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a clear and direct response, and explain your reason with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I don't really dislike any colour, but if I had to choose, it would be dark pink. This is because I don't own any items in that colour, so I don't feel comfortable wearing or using it.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains vocabulary errors ('brew' instead of 'brown'). Make sure to use correct vocabulary and sentence structures. Also, explain why your friends like the colour with specific reasons and linking words.

例: Most of my friends like brown because it has a warm tone. Moreover, brown is versatile and matches easily with many clothes and accessories, which makes it a popular choice among them.

提案: Your answer is somewhat vague and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to answer directly and provide reasons for your choice. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: That's a difficult question because my room has many colours, and I like them all. However, if I had to pick one, it would be purple because it feels too dark and gloomy for a relaxing space.

× I do love green color.

✓ I do love the color green.

The noun 'color' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' when specifying a particular color. Also, 'green color' is less natural than 'the color green' in English.

× there are several shade of green

✓ there are several shades of green

The noun 'shade' should be plural 'shades' because 'several' indicates more than one.

× I think of it is beautiful and really shy and make you feel more energized and.

✓ I think it is beautiful, really shy, and makes you feel more energized.

The sentence has incorrect structure and missing subjects and verbs. 'I think of it is' is incorrect; it should be 'I think it is'. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' which is incomplete.

× Actually I don't have dislike color, but if I say it's might be pink,

✓ Actually, I don't have a color I dislike, but if I had to say, it might be pink,

The phrase 'dislike color' is incorrect; it should be 'a color I dislike'. Also, 'it's might be' is incorrect; it should be 'it might be'. The sentence needs clearer phrasing for naturalness.

× I mean it's dark pink because I don't have the item that have this color.

✓ I mean it's dark pink because I don't have an item that has this color.

'the item' should be 'an item' because it is indefinite. Also, 'that have' should be 'that has' to agree with singular 'item'.

× I think it's brew almost.

✓ I think it's blue, almost.

'brew' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'blue'. Correcting to 'blue' makes the sentence meaningful.

× My friends, they love this color because I think it's tone is kind of warm and it's like it can match easily with the item.

✓ My friends love this color because I think its tone is kind of warm and it can match easily with items.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'My friends'. 'it's tone' should be 'its tone' (possessive pronoun). 'it's like it can' is awkward; better to say 'it can'. Also, 'the item' should be plural 'items' for general meaning.

× It's hard questions.

✓ That's a hard question.

The phrase 'It's hard questions' is incorrect because 'questions' is plural but 'hard' is singular adjective and 'It's' refers to singular. The correct phrase is 'That's a hard question'.

× My room is colorful so I love every color in this world, but if I have to choose one it might be a purple.

✓ My room is colorful, so I love every color in this world, but if I have to choose one, it might be purple.

The article 'a' before 'purple' is incorrect because 'purple' is an uncountable adjective here referring to color. The article should be removed.