Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap iyi ama daha doğal ve akıcı olması için gereksiz dolgu sözcüklerinden (ör. “uh”) kaçınmalı, bağlaçları doğru kullanmalı ve kısa destekleyici detaylar eklemelisin. Örneğin başlangıçta net bir konu cümlesi kur, sonra nedenini bağlaçla bağlayarak iki kısa cümleyle destekle. Maksimum 3-4 cümle kullan.

例: My favourite colour is purple. I prefer purple now because it makes me feel calm and comfortable, especially when I wear it or decorate my room with it.

提案: Cevaplar tekrar içeriyor ve dolgu sözcükleri var; bunları çıkar. Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzelt (ör. “it's makes” yerine “it makes”). Nedenleri daha spesifik örneklerle destekle ve mantıklı bağlaçlar kullan. 2-3 cümlede net ifade et.

例: I dislike the colour orange because it makes me feel uneasy; for example, bright orange walls can seem overwhelming and remind me of nausea. Therefore I avoid using it in my clothes or home decor.

提案: Cümle yapısı ve kelime seçimi hatalı; karşılaştırmayı düzgün kur ve fiil uyumuna dikkat et (“like me” ve “she always wears”). Daha fazla örnek vererek cümleyi zenginleştir. Bağlaçlarla mantıklı akış sağla.

例: One of my closest friends likes purple, like me. She often wears purple clothes because she finds the colour calming, and we sometimes buy similar purple items together.

提案: İki farklı renkten bahsetmişsin; cevap daha net olmalı—soruda odanda rahatsız eden renk isteniyor, bu yüzden tek bir renk seç ve nedeni kısa, spesifik örneklerle açıklamalısın. Bağlaç kullan ve cümleleri düzenli tut.

例: Black makes me uncomfortable in my room because it creates a heavy, dramatic atmosphere; for instance, black curtains make the space feel smaller and less cosy, so I avoid using it in my bedroom.

× I used to like the color red, however right now my favorite color is purple.

✓ I used to like the color red; however, right now my favorite color is purple.

The sentence mixes past habit with present state; punctuation and connector use needed. Use a semicolon or period before 'however' and add a comma after 'however' to join contrasting clauses correctly. Improve by separating clauses or using proper punctuation to show contrast.

× Uh, because it makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed.

✓ It makes me feel more comfortable and relaxed.

Sentence fragment: starting with 'because' creates a dependent clause without a main clause. Remove 'because' to make a complete sentence. The verb 'makes' is correct for third person singular.

× I used to hate the color orange, uh, when I was young.

✓ I used to hate the color orange when I was young.

The filler 'uh' is unnecessary in written form and interrupts fluency. The tense 'used to' correctly indicates a past habit; remove 'uh' for clarity.

× However, at the moment, uh, I really don't like the color orange because it's makes me feel awkward.

✓ However, at the moment, I really don't like the color orange because it makes me feel awkward.

The phrase 'it's makes' is incorrect: 'it's' (it is) cannot be followed by 'makes'. Use 'it makes'. Also remove filler 'uh' and keep present simple 'makes' to describe current feelings.

× It makes me feel like I'm sick.

✓ It makes me feel like I'm sick.

This sentence is grammatically correct; present simple 'makes' and contraction 'I'm' are appropriate to describe a current feeling. No change needed.

× One of my closest friends, like uh purple as me.

✓ One of my closest friends likes purple like me.

Errors: missing verb agreement and wrong word order. 'like uh purple as me' is ungrammatical. Correct structure: subject + verb ('likes') + object ('purple') + comparison ('like me'). Also remove 'uh'.

× I think she always wear purple clothes and feel more comfortable inside.

✓ I think she always wears purple clothes and feels more comfortable inside.

Subject-verb agreement error: with third person singular 'she', verbs in present simple require -s ('wears', 'feels'). Keep both verbs in present simple to match the habitual action.

× Generally orange makes me uncomfortable.

✓ Generally, orange makes me uncomfortable.

Add comma after 'Generally' for readability; the grammar is acceptable: 'orange' as a color noun can be singular to represent the color in general.

× However in my room I don't like the color black.

✓ However, in my room I don't like the color black.

Add comma after 'However' for correct introductory adverb punctuation. The sentence is otherwise correct; 'the color black' uses the definite article appropriately when specifying that color in the room.

× It makes the atmosphere look more dramatic.

✓ It makes the atmosphere look more dramatic.

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'More dramatic' is a proper comparative form; no change needed.