Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is slightly wordy and contains minor grammatical issues. Make the opening sentence more natural (avoid both 'would be' and 'definitely') and limit to up to 3–4 concise sentences. Add one brief specific example to support why pink makes you happy.

例: I like pink because it suits my skin tone and brightens my mood. For example, when I wear a pink top I often get compliments, which makes me feel more confident and cheerful.

提案: The response answers the question but includes strong negative language ('hate') and repetition. Also 'Things are wearing it on my clothes' is unclear. Use milder language, give a clear reason and one brief example, and correct grammar and coherence.

例: I don't like orange because it reminds me of monkeys, and I find their behaviour a bit unsettling. For instance, I avoid buying orange shirts because their colour brings that image to mind.

提案: Good direct answer with a reason. Improve fluency by using correct tense and smoother linking words, and shorten slightly. You could add one brief contrasting detail for richness.

例: Most of my friends prefer blue. When I asked them, they said blue reminds them of the sky and sea, so it makes them feel calm and relaxed.

提案: The idea is clear but phrasing is informal ('brings bad luck', 'etcetera') and a bit repetitive. Use more natural expressions, avoid vague terms like 'etcetera', and give one concise specific example of how black affects you emotionally or practically.

例: Black in my room makes me uncomfortable because it feels gloomy and reminds me of negative emotions such as sadness or jealousy. For example, a lot of black décor makes the room feel smaller and less inviting.

× My favorite color would be definitely pink because I love how it looks on me and I think it makes me feel happy and beautiful.

✓ My favorite color is definitely pink because I love how it looks on me and I think it makes me feel happy and beautiful.

Using 'would be' is an unnecessary conditional/modal form here. The question asks for a simple preference in the present, so use the simple present 'is'. Replace 'would be' with 'is' to state a current fact or preference clearly.

× I dislike the color orange because orange reminds me of monkeys and I hate monkeys.

✓ I dislike the color orange because it reminds me of monkeys, and I hate monkeys.

Repeating 'orange' is redundant; use a pronoun 'it' to refer back to the color. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'and' joining two independent clauses for correct sentence structure.

× I think they're really scary creatures and since orange reminds me of them, I don't like orange.

✓ I think they are really scary creatures, and since the color orange reminds me of them, I don't like it.

Pronoun reference is unclear: 'they're' refers to 'monkeys' but later 'orange' as subject is awkward. Use 'the color orange' for clarity and refer back to it with 'it'. Also expand contraction 'they're' to 'they are' for formality and add a comma before 'and'.

× Things are wearing it on my clothes.

✓ Some of my clothes have that color on them.

Original sentence is ungrammatical: 'Things are wearing it on my clothes' wrongly uses 'wear' and 'it'. Use a clear subject ('some of my clothes') and 'have that color on them' to express that clothes contain the color.

× My friends like the blue color the most and once I ask them the reason and they said that blue reminds them of the sky, therefore makes them calm and happy.

✓ My friends like blue the most. Once I asked them the reason, and they said that blue reminds them of the sky and therefore makes them feel calm and happy.

Multiple issues: use article correctly by saying 'like blue the most' (no 'the') and correct tense consistency: 'once I asked' (past) and 'they said' (past). Add 'feel' after 'makes them' to complete the verb phrase. Use commas to separate clauses and 'and therefore' to connect reasons.

× Seeing color black in my room makes me uncomfortable because I believe that it brings bad luck.

✓ Seeing the color black in my room makes me uncomfortable because I believe it brings bad luck.

Use the definite article 'the' before 'color black' to refer to a specific color. Also 'that' after 'believe' is optional and often dropped in such clauses; remove to make the sentence more natural.

× Plus it reminds me of pessimistic things and bad feelings like jealousy and etcetera.

✓ Also, it reminds me of negative things and bad feelings like jealousy, etcetera.

'Pessimistic things' is awkward; use 'negative things'. Begin the sentence with 'Also,' rather than 'Plus' for formality. Place 'etcetera' following a comma and avoid 'and etcetera' which is redundant (use either 'and' or 'etcetera').