Colours— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence and add a brief reason with specific detail. Use correct verb agreement and avoid vague phrasing. Keep it within 1–3 sentences and use a linking word if adding a second idea.

例: My favorite colours are red and black. I like red because it feels energetic and bold, and I prefer black for clothes because it looks neat and goes well with everything.

提案: Answer directly with correct tense and a clear reason. Avoid hesitation words and unclear phrases. Provide a specific reason or example to support your opinion, using a linking word to connect ideas.

例: I dislike green. I find bright green overwhelming because it feels too intense for my home, and it makes a room look too bright and artificial.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence and use consistent number/agreement (friend vs friends). Give a specific reason or example and link ideas coherently. Avoid fragmented sentences and unclear expressions.

例: Most of my friends like blue. They say blue is calming and versatile, so they often choose blue clothes or room decorations.

提案: Respond directly and use clear, concise sentences. State the colour and give a specific reason or brief example of why it makes you uncomfortable. Use a linking word to connect your reason to any supporting detail.

例: The brown colour in my room makes me uncomfortable because it feels dull and heavy. My brother chose the furniture colour, and it makes the room look darker than I prefer.

× My favorite color are red and black because I love it.

✓ My favorite colors are red and black because I love them.

The subject 'My favorite color' is singular but refers to two colors, so use the plural noun 'colors' and plural verb 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also pronoun 'it' should match the plural antecedent, so use 'them'. Suggestion: make subject and verb agree in number and use matching pronouns. ID:27

× I didn't like why, uh, green because it's like, it's so lie and you know, it's so bad.

✓ I don't like green because it's kind of ugly and, you know, it's so bad.

The question asks present preference, so use present tense 'don't like' instead of past 'didn't like'. The phrase 'it's like, it's so lie' is ungrammatical; replace with 'it's kind of ugly' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: use present simple for current likes/dislikes and choose appropriate descriptive adjectives. ID:5

× The colors that my friend liked the most were blue. all-purpose because they like it as if.

✓ The color that my friend likes the most is blue because they like it for everyday use.

Maintain present tense for habitual preference: use 'likes' (third person singular) for 'my friend' and singular 'color' if referring to one. Use 'is' to agree with singular subject. Replace unclear fragment 'all-purpose because they like it as if' with 'because they like it for everyday use' to express reason. Suggestion: ensure verb agrees with subject and keep tense consistent; rephrase unclear idioms. ID:2

× I guess the brown one because I really don't like it. It's in my room but my brother didn't take it away.

✓ I guess the brown one because I really don't like it. It's in my room but my brother won't take it away.

The situation describes a present ongoing problem, so use present or future modal 'won't' to indicate refusal rather than past 'didn't take'. 'Didn't take it away' implies a past action; 'won't take it away' correctly conveys that the brother refuses to remove it now. Suggestion: choose tense/modals that match the time frame and meaning. ID:5