Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific examples with proper sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and logical.

例: Yes, I am good at giving gifts. For example, I often give chocolates or small presents to my friends, colleagues, and students on their special days. I believe giving gifts brings happiness to both the giver and the receiver.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear words. Please respond directly to the question with clear examples of occasions when you give gifts. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I usually give gifts on birthdays and special occasions like festivals such as Diwali and Eid. Sometimes, I also give gifts during weddings or other celebrations.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to clearly state the factors you consider when choosing a gift, and explain them with simple, complete sentences.

例: When choosing a gift, I consider if it is useful and durable. Also, I make sure it is affordable and suitable for the person receiving it.

提案: Your answer has good content but the sentence structure is confusing. Try to answer directly and use clear sentences to describe your experience with handmade gifts.

例: Yes, when I was a child, I preferred giving handmade gifts. I used to make small presents for my best friends, which made the gifts more special.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Please express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use simple and complete sentences to explain your thoughts.

例: I believe that expensive gifts do not always express feelings better. Sometimes, an affordable or handmade gift can show more thought and care.

× Yes, I am ready. Good at giving kids gifts whenever my friends or my colleagues as well as I my students were day comes then I always give to them a gift such as chocolate or floods it is the. Give happiness to them.

✓ Yes, I am good at giving gifts. Whenever it is the birthday of my friends, colleagues, or students, I always give them a gift such as chocolate or flowers. It gives happiness to them.

The original sentence has sentence structure errors making it unclear and confusing. The sentence lacks proper subject-verb agreement and correct word order. The correction rearranges the sentence to a clear and grammatically correct form, ensuring the subject and verb agree and the meaning is clear.

× I usually give gifts to others whenever her or him birthday hour or any special occasion such as J Valley do Sarah as well as holy and they have all not some occasions whenever we can give gifts such as the.

✓ I usually give gifts to others on their birthdays or any special occasion such as Eid, Diwali, or Holi. There are many occasions when we can give gifts.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'her or him' instead of the correct possessive pronoun 'their'. Also, the sentence is unclear and contains improper nouns and phrases. The correction uses the correct pronoun and clarifies the occasions for giving gifts.

× Whenever I am choosing a gift too, then I consider some points. Firstly, I always consider that should we do real durable and that is brilliant and affordable for me as well as the.

✓ Whenever I choose a gift, I consider some points. Firstly, I always consider that it should be durable, beautiful, and affordable for me.

The original sentence has sentence structure errors and unclear phrasing. 'Should we do real durable' is incorrect. The correction simplifies and clarifies the sentence, using proper verb forms and adjectives.

× Yes, when I was a child that time or you always prefer to give a gift to someone that should that made by me on by hand and I always will. Used to give gifts to my best friends. By making handmade gift.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I always preferred to give gifts to someone that were made by me by hand. I used to give handmade gifts to my best friends.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes tenses and has sentence fragments. 'Prefer' should be in past tense 'preferred' to match 'was a child'. 'Used to give' is correct but was split incorrectly. The correction fixes tense consistency and sentence completeness.

× I I believe always so we should why affordable gift and not. Note better express expensive gift to your feeling because of whenever we give gifts. Then we can give.

✓ I always believe that we should give affordable gifts, not expensive ones. Affordable gifts can better express your feelings because when we give gifts, the thought matters more than the price.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear, with incorrect word order and missing words. The correction restructures the sentence to convey the intended meaning clearly and grammatically correctly.