Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答缺失，建议直接回答问题，表达自己是否擅长送礼，并简要说明原因。

例: Yes, I think I am good at giving gifts because I always try to choose something meaningful that suits the recipient's interests.

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达混乱。建议简洁明了地说明送礼的时间，并用连接词组织句子。

例: I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthdays or festivals because I want to show that I remember and care about the person.

提案: 回答内容混乱且不连贯，建议明确表达选择礼物时考虑的因素，并使用连接词使句子流畅。

例: When choosing a gift, I consider the person's personality and my budget because I want the gift to be suitable and affordable.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清。建议直接回答是否送过手工礼物，并简要说明原因。

例: No, I have never given a handmade gift because I am not good at making things by hand.

提案: 回答不连贯且含糊，建议明确表达观点，说明贵重礼物是否能更好表达感情，并举例说明。

例: I don't think expensive gifts always express feelings better. It depends on the recipient's preferences; some prefer simple gifts like clothes or toys.

× Uh, I think I already gave us a gift to others with words or birthdays coming and I need to give the gift to show that I remember in the first day and and for me to celebrate the birth.

✓ Uh, I think I have already given gifts to others on occasions like birthdays, and I need to give gifts to show that I remember the special day and to celebrate the birth.

这里的时态应该用现在完成时（have given），因为动作发生在过去但与现在相关。原句中使用了过去式gave且结构混乱，且“gave us a gift to others”表达不清，应改为“have given gifts to others”。

× Uh, I often choose a elephant often choose to consider two factors. First is is is weather weather is still there persons characters. Then as computer there twice I can afford to this to this page.

✓ Uh, I often choose an elephant and consider two factors. First is whether the person’s character suits it. Then, as a computer, there are twice I can afford to this page.

“a elephant”应为“an elephant”，因为elephant以元音音素开头。句子结构混乱，需理清主谓宾关系。

× Remember, I'm not I didn't I have I haven't give giving OK, that is made by myself because I am not going to hand making some. I'm not good at making something by my hand and I still uh.

✓ Remember, I haven't given any handmade gifts because I am not good at making things by hand.

“I haven't give giving”时态错误，应为“haven't given”。句子结构混乱，需简化表达。

× Oh, nothing I don't I don't think, uh expressive get some place my family because that's the best script is that suit with recipients of the best? Are some people like close, some people like toys, some people like luxury's.

✓ Oh, no, I don't think expensive gifts better express my feelings to my family because the best gift is the one that suits the recipient. Some people like clothes, some people like toys, some people like luxury items.

“expressive get some place”表达错误，应为“express better”。“close”应为“clothes”，“luxury's”应为“luxury items”。句子结构需调整使表达清晰。