Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句，且注意主谓一致。可以用更自然的表达方式说明自己不擅长送礼的原因。

例: To be honest, I am not very good at choosing gifts because I find it hard to decide. I worry that the recipients might feel disappointed if the gift is not suitable.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议注意句子结构和单词拼写，且举例时要明确对象和场合。

例: I usually give gifts on special occasions like birthdays, Father's Day, and Mother's Day. For example, I often buy flowers for my mother to show my gratitude.

提案: 回答不完整且表达混乱，建议用完整句子清晰表达考虑因素，并具体说明。

例: When choosing a gift, I consider several factors such as the price, the recipient's preferences, and the occasion.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不连贯，建议练习完整句子表达，避免断句，并清楚说明原因和偏好。

例: No, I have never given handmade gifts because I am not good at crafts. I prefer to buy practical and useful gifts, such as online games.

提案: 回答表达混乱且语法错误严重，建议练习用完整句子表达观点，避免重复和不连贯。

例: Not necessarily. I believe that both cheap and expensive gifts can express my feelings. For example, a handmade present can show my sincerity to my friends.

× I have difficulty in. Making decisions.

✓ I have difficulty in making decisions.

句子中断句不正确，'Making decisions'不应单独成句，应与前句连贯。应将句子合并为'I have difficulty in making decisions.'，使句子完整通顺。

× I don't want two people feel disappointed.

✓ I don't want two people to feel disappointed.

动词want后应接不定式结构'to feel'，缺少to导致语法错误。应使用'I don't want two people to feel disappointed.'。

× Are usually give gifts to others on some special days such as France birthday or Father's Day and Mother's Day.

✓ I usually give gifts to others on some special days such as my friend's birthday or Father's Day and Mother's Day.

句子缺少主语，且'France birthday'应为'friend's birthday'。应补充主语并更正名词所有格。

× For example, in modesty, I will buy a buy some flowers for her to express my gratitude.

✓ For example, in modesty, I will buy some flowers for her to express my gratitude.

句中出现重复单词'buy a buy'，应删除多余部分，保持句子通顺。

× When choosing a gift, I will consider using a range of. Dimensions for such as prize. Others preferences. And so on.

✓ When choosing a gift, I will consider a range of factors such as price, others' preferences, and so on.

句子断句错误，且单词拼写错误（prize应为price），缺少复数所有格。应合并句子并更正拼写和所有格。

× No, I don't because I am not good at doing craft.

✓ No, I don't because I am not good at doing crafts.

craft应为复数形式crafts，表示手工艺。

× And I like to buy some gifts that is practical.

✓ And I like to buy some gifts that are practical.

主语gifts为复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式are，保持主谓一致。

× And a useful to their person I give.

✓ And useful to the person I give them to.

句子结构混乱，'a useful'用法错误，应去掉冠词并调整词序，使句子通顺。

× So I always selected games online and.

✓ So I always select games online.

句子不完整，'and'后无内容，应删除'and'并调整时态与上下文一致。

× Not necessarily, I think both cheap and expensive gives Can share your share my feelings?

✓ Not necessarily, I think both cheap and expensive gifts can share my feelings.

gives应为gifts，且句中多余的'Can'和'your share'应删除，保持句子通顺。

× If I give a hand made present to my friends in showed mine.

✓ If I give a handmade present to my friends, it shows my feelings.

句子结构错误，'in showed mine'不合语法，应改为'it shows my feelings'，表达清晰。