Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇。

例: Yes, I believe I am good at giving gifts because I always choose presents that match the recipient's personality and preferences, which makes them happy.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰，建议使用连贯的句子并避免重复，同时提供更具体的细节。

例: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays or when someone moves into a new home because these moments are worth celebrating and gifts can bring joy.

提案: 回答语法混乱且表达不清晰，建议理清句子结构，使用连接词，并具体说明考虑的因素。

例: When choosing a gift, I consider the recipient's interests and personality to ensure the gift suits them. I also think about the gift's durability and appearance to make it both practical and attractive.

提案: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，建议使用正确的时态，简洁表达，并增加连贯性。

例: When I was a child, I often made handmade gifts for Mother's Day and Father's Day, such as cards decorated with drawings and stickers. However, as I grew older, I rarely made handmade gifts, but I did give one recently.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，建议简化表达，明确观点，并使用连贯的句子。

例: I don't believe expensive gifts express feelings better. Instead, the value of a gift depends on the effort and thought put into it, not its price.

× my friends and my families are very satisfying with my gift after I sending out.

✓ my friends and my family are very satisfied with my gift after I send it out.

families 应该用 family 表示家庭成员的整体，satisfying 是形容词，应该用过去分词 satisfied 来表示感到满意。

× I always sending gifts for different people according to their own personality and their own habits, so I think I'm quite good at it.

✓ I always send gifts to different people according to their own personality and habits, so I think I'm quite good at it.

always 后面应该用动词原形 send，而不是现在分词 sending。

× I always sending gifts for different people according to their own personality and their own habits, so I think I'm quite good at it.

✓ I always send gifts to different people according to their own personality and habits, so I think I'm quite good at it.

动词 send 后面接礼物的对象时，应该用介词 to 而不是 for。

× I usually give gifts to my friends and family on their special days, for example like their birthday or their day they move to a new home.

✓ I usually give gifts to my friends and family on their special days, for example, their birthdays or the day they move to a new home.

for example 后面不需要 like，且 birthday 应该用复数 birthdays，the day 需要加定冠词。

× The because all these days are the days are worth celebrating and a gift for them is very useful and make them happy and satisfying.

✓ Because all these days are worth celebrating, a gift for them is very useful and makes them happy and satisfied.

句子结构混乱，the because 不正确，动词 make 应该用第三人称单数 makes，形容词 satisfying 应改为过去分词 satisfied。

× Well I would consider the one who received the gifts as the recipient he his or her interests and personality which will this does this gift suitable for them or not.

✓ Well, I would consider the recipient's interests and personality to see whether this gift is suitable for them or not.

句子中 he his or her 使用混乱，应该用所有格 recipient's，句子结构需要调整使其通顺。

× And also about consider about the durable and appearance of the present which is good looking.

✓ And also consider the durability and appearance of the present, which should be good looking.

consider 后不需要介词 about，durable 应改为名词 durability。

× When I was small, I give a handmade present quite often during the Mother's Day or Father's Day.

✓ When I was small, I gave handmade presents quite often during Mother's Day or Father's Day.

描述过去的动作，动词 give 应用过去式 gave，Mother's Day 和 Father's Day 前不加定冠词。

× I always make a made a card for my mom and dad.

✓ I always made a card for my mom and dad.

句子中 make a made 混用，应使用过去式 made。

× I drew on it and stick some stickers on it.

✓ I drew on it and stuck some stickers on it.

描述过去动作，stick 应用过去式 stuck。

× And when I grow up I seldom make hand make give, but I give it once.

✓ And now that I have grown up, I seldom make handmade gifts, but I gave one once.

描述现在和过去的动作，grow up 应用完成时 have grown up，hand make give 词序错误，应为 handmade gifts，过去动作 gave。

× I don't think a gift is valued by how much it costs. It is.

✓ I don't think a gift is valued by how much it costs.

句子中 It is 多余，应删除。

× Uh I I I high cost gift didn't better express my feelings as I think it doesn't need to make much effort.

✓ I don't think a high-cost gift better expresses my feelings because I think it doesn't require much effort.

high cost gift 应加连字符 high-cost gift，didn't better express 语法错误，应改为 better expresses，make much effort 应改为 require much effort。