Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: حاول تبقى إجابتك أكثر وضوح وتنظيم. استخدم جملة رئيسية واضحة ترد على السؤال مباشرة، وبعدها تضيف تفاصيل داعمة بشكل مرتب ومن غير تكرار.

例: Yes, I am good at giving gifts because I enjoy shopping and like to keep presents ready for any special occasion to surprise my friends and family.

提案: ركز على ترتيب أفكارك واستخدم روابط بين الجمل لتوضيح متى ولماذا تعطي الهدايا. تجنب التكرار وحاول تكون الجمل أكثر طبيعية.

例: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays or weddings because I believe it helps to strengthen relationships and show my appreciation to my friends.

提案: حاول تستخدم جمل كاملة وواضحة مع ربط الأفكار بشكل أفضل. وضح كيف تأخذ اهتمامات الشخص في الاعتبار عند اختيار الهدية.

例: When choosing a gift, I consider the person's hobbies and preferences to make sure the gift is something they will truly appreciate.

提案: تجنب استخدام كلمات سلبية مثل "silly" ووضح وجهة نظرك بطريقة أكثر إيجابية. حاول أن تشرح سبب تفضيلك للهدايا المشتراة بشكل طبيعي.

例: No, I haven't given handmade gifts because I feel more confident buying presents that I know the person will like.

提案: حاول أن تكون جملك أكثر وضوحاً ومنطقية. استخدم كلمات مناسبة للتعبير عن المشاعر وتأثير الهدية بدلاً من جمل غير واضحة.

例: Yes, I believe expensive gifts can better express my feelings because they show how much I value the person and can make them feel special and appreciated.

× I think yes Sir because I love to go shopping every day and buying many things to save it in my in in my bedroom to any occasion to give everyone this gift.

✓ I think yes Sir because I love to go shopping every day and buy many things to save in my bedroom for any occasion to give everyone these gifts.

The verb 'buying' should be in base form 'buy' after 'love to' to maintain correct verb form. Also, 'save it' is incorrect; 'save' should be followed by the object without 'it' here. 'These gifts' is more appropriate than 'this gift' when referring to multiple items.

× I think yes Sir because I love to go shopping every day and buying many things to save it in my in in my bedroom to any occasion to give everyone this gift.

✓ I think yes Sir because I love to go shopping every day and buy many things to save in my bedroom for any occasion to give everyone these gifts.

The phrase 'this gift' is singular but the context implies multiple gifts, so 'these gifts' is correct to match the plural 'many things'. Also, 'to any occasion' should be 'for any occasion' to express purpose.

× I think yes Sir because I love to go shopping every day and buying many things to save it in my in in my bedroom to any occasion to give everyone this gift.

✓ I think yes Sir because I love to go shopping every day and buy many things to save in my bedroom for any occasion to give everyone these gifts.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used before 'any occasion'; the correct preposition is 'for' to indicate purpose or intended use.

× I give a gift to other than occasion like a birthday or wedding that can spread love in the society and they're and they're my friend and make them love me.

✓ I give gifts on occasions like birthdays or weddings that can spread love in society and they are my friends and make them love me.

'A gift' should be plural 'gifts' to match general statement. 'Other than occasion' is incorrect; 'on occasions' is correct. 'Birthday' and 'wedding' should be plural to match general occasions. 'They're' is repeated and should be 'they are'. 'In the society' should be 'in society' without 'the'.

× I give a gift to other than occasion like a birthday or wedding that can spread love in the society and they're and they're my friend and make them love me.

✓ I give gifts on occasions like birthdays or weddings that can spread love in society and they are my friends and make them love me.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'on' is used with occasions. Also, 'in the society' should be 'in society' as 'society' is used in a general sense.

× I give a gift to other than occasion like a birthday or wedding that can spread love in the society and they're and they're my friend and make them love me.

✓ I give gifts on occasions like birthdays or weddings that can spread love in society and they are my friends and make them love me.

'They're and they're my friend' is incorrect and redundant; it should be 'they are my friends' to correctly refer to multiple friends.

× I usually concerned about their hobbies and the gifts or they want they want to get in the gift.

✓ I usually am concerned about their hobbies and the gifts they want to get.

The verb 'concerned' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the correct present tense. The phrase 'or they want they want to get in the gift' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'they want to get'.

× I usually concerned about their hobbies and the gifts or they want they want to get in the gift.

✓ I usually am concerned about their hobbies and the gifts they want to get.

The conjunction 'or' is incorrectly used here; 'and' is appropriate to connect hobbies and gifts. Also, repetition of 'they want' is an error.

× No, because I am not good to make a handmade gift because I think it's silly.

✓ No, because I am not good at making handmade gifts because I think it's silly.

The phrase 'good to make' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'good at making'. Also, 'a handmade gift' should be plural 'handmade gifts' to generalize.

× No, because I am not good to make a handmade gift because I think it's silly.

✓ No, because I am not good at making handmade gifts because I think it's silly.

After 'good at', the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'making' is correct instead of 'to make'.

× I prefer to go shopping and buy a gift to them.

✓ I prefer to go shopping and buy a gift for them.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect after 'buy a gift'; the correct preposition is 'for' to indicate the recipient.

× I prefer to go shopping and buy a gift to them.

✓ I prefer to go shopping and buy a gift for them.

The preposition 'to' is incorrect here; 'for' is the correct preposition to indicate the beneficiary of the gift.

× Yes, I think it's SO can be enjoyable and make them feel happy and they would get confident when they get it.

✓ Yes, I think it can be enjoyable and make them feel happy and confident when they get it.

The word 'SO' is incorrectly used and unnecessary. 'Get confident' should be 'feel confident' or just 'confident' as an adjective. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.