Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer shows enthusiasm, but it has grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly.

例: Yes, I enjoy giving gifts to my close friends and family. Whenever I visit them, I like to bring a small present, which makes both me and them happy.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical mistakes. Try to complete your sentences and use proper plural forms. Also, organize your ideas clearly and avoid trailing off.

例: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries, Christmas, and other festivals.

提案: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Focus on expressing your ideas clearly with complete sentences. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and provide specific examples.

例: When choosing a gift, I consider what the person really wants and prefers. For example, I like to buy useful gifts that will make them happy.

提案: Your answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use correct verb tenses. Also, make your sentences more concise and natural.

例: Yes, I often give handmade gifts because I enjoy making something special myself. It shows that I care and adds a personal touch.

提案: Your answer is too long and contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to organize your ideas logically.

例: I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. Simple handmade gifts can be more meaningful because they show effort, creativity, and care.

× I think it's ace I love to giving gifts for my close one and friends families.

✓ I think it's ace I love giving gifts to my close ones and friends' families.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund form 'giving' instead of the infinitive 'to giving'. Also, 'close one' should be plural 'close ones' and 'friends families' should be possessive 'friends' families'.

× Every time when I visit them I will bought some gifts for them and it's make me feel so happy and they also happy for seeing the gift.

✓ Every time I visit them, I buy some gifts for them and it makes me feel so happy and they are also happy to see the gift.

'Will bought' is incorrect; 'bought' is past tense and 'will' indicates future. The correct present tense verb is 'buy'. 'It's make' should be 'it makes' to agree with singular subject. 'They also happy for seeing' should be 'they are also happy to see'.

× I love to giving gifts for my close one and friends families.

✓ I love giving gifts to my close ones and friends' families.

The correct preposition after 'giving gifts' is 'to', not 'for'.

× I love to giving gifts for my close one and friends families.

✓ I love giving gifts to my close ones and friends' families.

'Close one' should be plural 'close ones' to match the context. 'Friends families' should be possessive 'friends' families'.

× Every time when I visit them I will bought some gifts for them and it's make me feel so happy and they also happy for seeing the gift.

✓ Every time I visit them, I buy some gifts for them and it makes me feel so happy and they are also happy to see the gift.

The phrase 'Every time when' is redundant; 'Every time' suffices. 'Will bought' is incorrect; 'bought' is past tense and 'will' indicates future. The correct present tense verb is 'buy'. 'It's make' should be 'it makes' to agree with singular subject. 'They also happy for seeing' should be 'they are also happy to see'.

× I love to giving gifts for my close one and friends families.

✓ I love giving gifts to my close ones and friends' families.

The correct preposition after 'giving gifts' is 'to', not 'for'.

× I usually give gifts when someone needs a special days like a birthday and someone have a special day anniversary and for the our special occasion like Christmas and our festival that time I.

✓ I usually give gifts on special days like birthdays, anniversaries, and our special occasions like Christmas and festivals.

The sentence is fragmented and contains multiple errors: 'needs a special days' should be 'on special days'; 'someone have' should be 'someone has'; 'special day anniversary' is awkward, better 'anniversaries'; 'for the our special occasion' is incorrect, should be 'our special occasions'; the sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.

× I usually give gifts when someone needs a special days like a birthday and someone have a special day anniversary and for the our special occasion like Christmas and our festival that time I.

✓ I usually give gifts on special days like birthdays, anniversaries, and our special occasions like Christmas and festivals.

The pronouns 'someone' and 'our' are used inconsistently and awkwardly. 'Someone needs a special days' mixes singular and plural. The sentence should use plural forms and consistent pronouns.

× The consider while choosing the gift is what they really want and what they really prefer and which gives make them happy.

✓ When choosing a gift, I consider what they really want, what they prefer, and which gift will make them happy.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and awkward. 'The consider' is incorrect; it should be 'I consider'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct verb forms.

× The consider while choosing the gift is what they really want and what they really prefer and which gives make them happy.

✓ When choosing a gift, I consider what they really want, what they prefer, and which gift will make them happy.

The pronoun 'they' is used correctly here, but the sentence structure makes it confusing. Clarifying the subject and verb improves understanding.

× I like to buy that kind of gifts like if someone wanted something like useful like.

✓ I like to buy gifts that are useful if someone wants something like that.

The sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Wanted' should be 'wants' to match present tense. The phrase 'like useful like' is redundant and unclear.

× Yes, of course I always give handmade gifts because I love to make some kind of gifts and I just make them feel special to by myself.

✓ Yes, of course I always give handmade gifts because I love to make some kinds of gifts and I just make them myself to feel special.

The phrase 'to by myself' is incorrect; it should be 'myself'. 'Some kind of gifts' should be 'some kinds of gifts' or 'some kind of gift'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs reordering.

× Yes, of course I always give handmade gifts because I love to make some kind of gifts and I just make them feel special to by myself.

✓ Yes, of course I always give handmade gifts because I love to make some kinds of gifts and I just make them myself to feel special.

The reflexive pronoun 'by myself' is incorrect here; the correct form is 'myself'.

× That's why I made my by myself and I give them the gift.

✓ That's why I made it myself and gave them the gift.

'Made my by myself' is incorrect; it should be 'made it myself'. Also, tense consistency requires 'gave' instead of 'give' since the action is in the past.

× That's why I made my by myself and I give them the gift.

✓ That's why I made it myself and gave them the gift.

The verb 'give' should be in past tense 'gave' to match 'made' and maintain tense consistency.

× I do not believe that expensive gifts better express our feelings because if someone give all the simple hand made gifts, it's it's feel so good and proud of them because it's like to meet by themselves and their hard work and their creativity is use on there.

✓ I do not believe that expensive gifts better express our feelings because if someone gives simple handmade gifts, it feels so good and makes me proud of them because they made it themselves and their hard work and creativity are shown there.

'If someone give' should be 'if someone gives' for subject-verb agreement. 'It's it's feel' is incorrect; should be 'it feels'. 'Like to meet by themselves' is unclear; corrected to 'made it themselves'. 'Their creativity is use on there' should be 'their creativity is shown there'.

× if someone give all the simple hand made gifts, it's it's feel so good and proud of them

✓ if someone gives simple handmade gifts, it feels so good and makes me proud of them

The verb 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'someone'. 'It's it's feel' is incorrect; should be 'it feels'. Also, 'proud of them' needs a verb like 'makes me proud of them'.

× simple hand made gifts

✓ simple handmade gifts

'Hand made' should be combined into one word 'handmade' as an adjective.