Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的表达，并增加连接词使回答更流畅。

例: I think I am good at giving gifts to my friends because I know their interests well. However, I find it difficult to choose gifts for elderly people since I don't spend much time with them.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，句子不够自然。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，并注意句子完整性和逻辑性。

例: I usually give gifts on special occasions such as birthdays or university graduation parties. I like to bring presents for the main person being celebrated.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，词汇使用不准确。建议明确表达考虑的因素，使用更合适的词汇，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: First of all, I consider the recipient's preferences because the gift should match their interests. Secondly, I think about the budget to make sure the gift is affordable.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的表达方式，简洁明了地说明原因，并避免重复。

例: I rarely give handmade gifts because I am not good at making things and I don't have enough time. I feel a bit sorry about this.

提案: 回答中语法错误明显，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的句型，避免重复，明确表达观点。

例: No, I don't think expensive gifts express feelings better. What matters more is whether the gift suits the recipient's interests.

× For my friends, I think I can precisely get their things that are interested

✓ For my friends, I think I can precisely get the things they are interested in

这里“things that are interested”结构不正确，应该用“things they are interested in”表示“他们感兴趣的东西”，即关系代词和介词的正确搭配。

× but for elderly people I can't get very well because I don't get along with her, get along with him too much time.

✓ but for elderly people I can't get very well because I don't get along with them very well.

这里“her”和“him”指代不明确且不一致，应该用复数代词“them”指代“elderly people”，且“get along with him too much time”表达不自然，改为“get along with them very well”。

× Big events like birthday or the celebration of getting university, I will get some gifts to the men person of the party.

✓ Big events like birthdays or the celebration of entering university, I will give some gifts to the men at the party.

“birthday”应为复数“birthdays”，且“the celebration of getting university”表达不准确，改为“the celebration of entering university”。“get some gifts to the men person”语法错误，应为“give some gifts to the men”。

× I will get some gifts to the men person of the party.

✓ I will give some gifts to the men at the party.

“get gifts to someone”用法错误，正确表达是“give gifts to someone”。“of the party”应改为“at the party”表示在派对上。

× First of all is the preference.

✓ First of all, it is the preference.

句子缺少主语，应该加上“it is”使句子完整。

× I think the preference is the main factor that I should get the gift or not.

✓ I think the preference is the main factor in deciding whether I should get the gift or not.

“that I should get the gift or not”表达不完整，需用“in deciding whether...”结构使句子更通顺。

× And the second reason is the viability because I can get too much money for the gift.

✓ And the second reason is affordability because I cannot spend too much money on the gift.

“viability”用词不当，应为“affordability”（负担能力）。“I can get too much money”表达错误，应该是“cannot spend too much money”。

× Seldom, because I'm not very well at making goods or something and I don't have too much time to do this.

✓ Seldom, because I'm not very good at making things and I don't have much time to do this.

“not very well”应改为“not very good”修饰形容词。 “goods or something”表达不自然，改为“things”。“too much time”改为“much time”更合适。

× So that is a shame for me and for my friends.

✓ So that is a shame for me and my friends.

“for me and for my friends”中重复使用“for”显得冗余，去掉一个“for”更自然。

× No, definitely not. Because give and give is not depends on the prices, it depends on the interest of the people that receive that receive the gift.

✓ No, definitely not. Because giving is not dependent on the price; it depends on the interests of the people who receive the gift.

“give and give is not depends”语法错误，应改为“giving is not dependent”。“the interest of the people that receive that receive the gift”重复且用词错误，应改为“the interests of the people who receive the gift”。