Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ví dụ, hãy dùng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

例: Yes, I think I am good at giving gifts because I always try to understand the personality of the person. For instance, when I choose gifts for my friends, I pick something that suits their interests and makes them feel appreciated.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ cho chính xác hơn. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể, sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc.

例: I usually give gifts on people's birthdays because I believe it's a special occasion to celebrate their life. Therefore, I always try to choose meaningful presents that show my care and appreciation.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa phù hợp. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, chính xác và tránh dùng từ không đúng nghĩa. Hãy bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

例: When I choose a gift, I think about whether it will be useful to the person. Since I am practical, I prefer to give something that they can use in their daily life.

提案: Câu trả lời cần được sắp xếp lại cho rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ có liên kết với nhau bằng liên từ. Hãy nói rõ hơn về trải nghiệm làm quà handmade.

例: Yes, when I was in high school, I had a lot of free time, so I made handmade gifts for my friends on their birthdays. I enjoyed creating something special and personal for them.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy bổ sung lý do cụ thể và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc, tự nhiên hơn.

例: I don't believe expensive gifts necessarily express feelings better. Instead, I think the most important thing is to choose a gift that is useful and makes the receiver feel happy and appreciated.

× If I want to give a gift to other people, I will learn about character of these people.

✓ If I want to give a gift to other people, I will learn about the character of these people.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'character' because it refers to a specific characteristic of the people mentioned. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article.

× For example, when I want to give for my friends, I will choose something friendly.

✓ For example, when I want to give to my friends, I will choose something friendly.

The verb 'give' requires the preposition 'to' before the indirect object. 'Give for' is incorrect in this context.

× I usually give gifts to others in their birthday.

✓ I usually give gifts to others on their birthday.

The correct preposition to use with 'birthday' is 'on' because it refers to a specific day.

× For me birthday is a special day because it's mark the day they appear in the world.

✓ For me, a birthday is a special day because it marks the day they appeared in the world.

The sentence lacks articles and has verb tense and subject-verb agreement errors. 'Birthday' needs an article 'a', 'it's mark' should be 'it marks' for subject-verb agreement, and 'appear' should be past tense 'appeared' to indicate a past event.

× So I always want to choose a meaningful gift and give them in this special.

✓ So I always want to choose a meaningful gift and give it to them on this special day.

The phrase 'give them in this special' is incomplete and incorrect. 'Give it to them' is correct for the object, and 'on this special day' uses the correct preposition and completes the phrase.

× When choosing a gift, I consider about whether this gift useful for this person or not.

✓ When choosing a gift, I consider whether this gift is useful for this person or not.

The verb 'consider' does not require the preposition 'about'. Also, the sentence is missing the verb 'is' to link the subject and adjective.

× I am a rapid person so I always want something I buy will feed on this person and they will use it.

✓ I am a practical person, so I always want something I buy to be useful for this person and that they will use it.

'Rapid' is incorrect here; 'practical' fits the context. Also, 'will feed on this person' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'to be useful for this person'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Yes, when I was young and I was a high school student, I have so much time and I make some handmade gifts for my friends at that time in my birthday I recall and make a special.

✓ Yes, when I was young and a high school student, I had a lot of time and I made some handmade gifts for my friends on their birthdays. I recall making something special.

The sentence has tense inconsistencies: 'have' should be past tense 'had', 'make' should be 'made'. Also, 'in my birthday' should be 'on their birthdays'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

✓ Do expensive gifts better express your feelings?

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× As I mentioned before, I consider about this gift is useful for these people or not.

✓ As I mentioned before, I consider whether this gift is useful for these people or not.

The verb 'consider' does not take the preposition 'about'. Also, 'whether' is used to introduce alternatives or possibilities.

× So I think the most important thing when I choose a gift is useful and make the receiver feel better, feel better.

✓ So I think the most important thing when I choose a gift is that it is useful and makes the receiver feel better.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' for the second clause and the verb should be 'makes' to agree with 'it'. The repeated phrase 'feel better' is redundant and removed for clarity.