Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors which affect naturalness. Try to respond directly with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: To be honest, I am not very good at giving gifts to everyone. However, when it comes to close friends or family, I try my best because I know their preferences well.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. Also, avoid redundancy and grammatical mistakes to make your answer more natural and effective.

例: I usually give gifts on special occasions like anniversaries, birthdays, or weddings. For example, I often gift my friends items like new shoes, pouches, or earphones on their birthdays.

提案: Your answer has good points but is repetitive and grammatically incorrect. Use linking words like 'firstly' and 'also' properly, and structure your answer clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details.

例: When choosing a birthday gift, I first consider the person's personality and preferences. I also think about what might make their life easier. Additionally, I keep my budget in mind to select an appropriate gift.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and concisely, using correct grammar and linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: To be honest, I am not very skilled at making handmade gifts. However, when I was a child, I gave my teacher a handmade pencil box for her birthday, and she appreciated it very much.

提案: Your answer is confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly with supporting reasons, use linking words to connect ideas, and avoid redundancy.

例: I believe that expensive gifts do not necessarily express feelings better. What matters more is the emotion and thought behind the gift rather than its price.

× Well, to be honest, I'm not totally good to giving you a gift to another, but I think two people I know very well at that time, I'm very good to gift giving gift at that person and I know the real choice of that people also.

✓ Well, to be honest, I'm not totally good at giving a gift to others, but I think for two people I know very well at that time, I'm very good at giving gifts to those persons and I also know the real choice of those people.

The preposition 'to' is incorrectly used with 'good' and 'gift giving'. The correct preposition after 'good' in this context is 'at'. Also, 'to another' should be 'to others' to indicate giving gifts to other people. 'Gift giving gift at that person' is incorrect; it should be 'giving gifts to those persons'. 'That people' should be 'those people' as 'people' is plural and requires 'those' as a demonstrative pronoun.

× But most of the time I give given different to my friends at the word is.

✓ But most of the time I have given different gifts to my friends at work.

The phrase 'give given' is incorrect; the correct form is 'have given' to indicate past actions with present relevance. 'Different' should be followed by a noun, such as 'different gifts'. 'At the word is' seems to be a mishearing or typo and should be 'at work'.

× Then I give new shoes, pouches, earphones etcetera at their word is.

✓ Then I give new shoes, pouches, earphones, etc., as gifts to them.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate the recipient is 'to'. Also, 'their word is' is incorrect and unclear; it should be replaced with 'to them' or 'as gifts'.

× Well firstly when I select any birthday gift for anyone, firstly I see the personality of that person at home, think that they want and the thing which they want to make their life easy and apart from this I also think about the budget of that person.

✓ Well, firstly when I select any birthday gift for anyone, I first consider the personality of that person at home, think about what they want and the things that can make their life easier, and apart from this, I also think about the budget of that person.

The preposition 'at' in 'personality of that person at home' is unnecessary and confusing; it should be omitted. Also, 'think that they want' should be 'think about what they want' to correctly express consideration. 'Thing which they want to make their life easy' should be 'things that can make their life easier' for clarity and correctness.

× Well to be honest I'm not properly well prepared for making the handmade gifts but at my small age at the childhood AI gift 1 pencil box to my teacher as a as a birthday gift and she loves me a lot due to that gift.

✓ Well, to be honest, I'm not properly well prepared for making handmade gifts, but when I was small, in my childhood, I gave one pencil box to my teacher as a birthday gift and she loved me a lot because of that gift.

The phrase 'at my small age at the childhood' is incorrect; it should be 'when I was small, in my childhood'. 'AI gift 1 pencil box' is incorrect; it should be 'I gave one pencil box'. 'She loves me a lot due to that gift' should be 'she loved me a lot because of that gift' to maintain past tense consistency.

× Well to be honest I think it's only a myth because expensive rates are not more than eye-catching for everyone.

✓ Well, to be honest, I think it's only a myth because expensive gifts are not more eye-catching to everyone.

'Expensive rates' is incorrect; it should be 'expensive gifts'. Also, 'not more than eye-catching' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'not more eye-catching'. The preposition 'for' should be 'to' when referring to perception.

× Because if the person give a gift to express their feelings or with their emotions and that gives were more expensive than the real expensive gifts.

✓ Because if a person gives a gift to express their feelings or emotions, that gift is more valuable than really expensive gifts.

'Person give' should be 'person gives' to agree with third person singular. 'That gives were more expensive' is incorrect; it should be 'that gift is more valuable'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.