Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 句子有语法和流畅性问题。应直接开门见山回答，并用连接词和更自然的表达简洁说明挑选礼物的原则。注意单复数和词序（e.g. "according to" 的用法）。最多不超过5句。

例: Yes. I usually choose gifts based on the recipient's interests and habits. For example, if someone enjoys reading, I buy a book I think they'll like. This way the gift feels personal and useful.

提案: 回答含冗余且语法不够自然。应使用更自然的时间表达并合并信息，避免重复（festival/birthday 和习俗重复）。可以给出一两个具体例子使内容更丰富。

例: I usually give gifts on special occasions, such as festivals and birthdays. For example, during Lunar New Year I often give red envelopes, and for birthdays I choose something related to the person's hobbies.

提案: 结构较好但可更自然、连贯。可以用连接词把主题句与例子更紧密地衔接，并补充一两点考虑因素（如预算或实用性），使答案更具体。注意时态和标点。

例: I consider the person's hobbies and daily habits when choosing a gift. For instance, one friend loves cooking, so I gave her a cookbook for her birthday, and she really appreciated it because it matched her interest.

提案: 表达有些笨拙且重复（time consuming / spend much time）。应先直接回答，然后给出简洁原因并可提出替代方案（例如写卡片）。注意避免双重否定或多余短语。

例: No, I haven't. Handmade gifts take a lot of time and my crafts usually look low-quality, so I prefer to buy something more suitable. However, I sometimes write a heartfelt card instead.

提案: 回答清晰但句子结构需更自然。可先给直接立场，然后用一两句解释并举例说明如何用合适的礼物表达感情。注意搭配（"fit their interests"）。

例: No, expensive gifts don't necessarily express feelings better. If a gift doesn't match someone's interests, it won't be meaningful; I'd rather choose a thoughtful, affordable present that suits them.

× Yes, I always choose the gift or according to their interests or habit.

✓ Yes, I always choose the gift according to their interests or habits.

句中使用了“or”导致连接不当且逻辑混乱。应直接用“according to”表示“根据”，并且“habit”应为复数“habits”与“their”一致。建议把“or”去掉并将“habit”改为“habits”。

× So every time I will choose the gift which is very suitable for my friends.

✓ So every time I choose a gift that is very suitable for my friends.

使用“which”在限定性定语从句中可以，但更自然的是用“that”；此外时态上不需要将来时“will”，一般习惯用一般现在时“choose”。把“the gift”改为不定项“a gift”更符合语境。

× I really give gifts to others when the festival comes or when it is their birthdays.

✓ I usually give gifts to others when festivals come or when it is their birthdays.

原句“really give”用词不当，应用频率副词“usually”；“the festival”应改为复数“festivals”或更一般的“festivals come”。保持一般现在时描述习惯性动作。

× It is our traditional habits to give gifts during the festival and birthdays.

✓ It is our tradition to give gifts during festivals and on birthdays.

“traditional habits”搭配不自然，应说“our tradition”或“our traditional habit”；“during the festival”太具体，改为“during festivals”；“and birthdays”前需加介词“on birthdays”。建议简化为“our tradition”。

× I will consider their hobbies or habits.

✓ I consider their hobbies or habits.

作为一般习惯性行为，用一般现在时更合适，把“will consider”改为“consider”。另外句子本身没有人称错误，但时态需要调整。

× For example, one of my friends is good at cooking so on her birthday I gave her a cookbook as a present she really appreciated.

✓ For example, one of my friends is good at cooking, so on her birthday I gave her a cookbook as a present and she really appreciated it.

原句缺少逗号并且连接两个分句需要连词或标点，且“appreciated”通常带宾语“it”。建议加逗号与连词“and”，并补上宾语“it”。时态过去式“gave... appreciated”是正确的。

× I'm afraid not. I think making a handmade present is time consuming and although I spend much time on it, I make it a poor quality item so I think it's is not a suitable gift for me and my friend.

✓ I'm afraid not. I think making a handmade present is time-consuming and although I would spend a lot of time on it, I might make a poor-quality item, so I think it is not a suitable gift for me or my friend.

1) “time consuming”应连字符作形容词“time-consuming”。2) “spend much time”在口语中改为“spend a lot of time”更自然。3) “I make it a poor quality item”语法和表达不自然，应改为“I might make a poor-quality item”。4) “it's is”有重复，应为“it is”。5) “for me and my friend”建议改为“for me or my friend”更合适。

× I'm afraid not. Although they are expensive or even prohibitive, if they are not suitable for my friend, I would prefer to buy something more fit their interest or hobbies.

✓ I'm afraid not. Although they may be expensive or even prohibitively priced, if they are not suitable for my friend, I would prefer to buy something that better fits their interests or hobbies.

1) “even prohibitive”用词不完整，改为“even prohibitively priced”更准确。2) “more fit their interest or hobbies”语法错误，应为“that better fits their interests or hobbies”或“better fitting their interests”。3) “interest”需用复数“interests”与“their”一致。