Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，但过于简短且缺乏细节与连贯性。应先用主题句直接回答，然后用一两句具体原因或例子支持，同时注意避免重复和语法错误。可以加入连接词使回答更自然。

例: Not really. I find it hard to choose presents because I worry they won’t suit the recipient. For example, when my cousin moved into a new flat, I hesitated between kitchenware and decorations, so I ended up buying nothing.

提案: 回答明确，但用词可更自然和具体。可以说明“vacations”指哪些节日或场合，并补充频率或具体例子，使用连接词衔接信息。

例: I usually give presents on my best friend's birthday and during major holidays like Chinese New Year or Christmas. For instance, I always buy a small birthday gift every year for my friend and a family present for New Year.

提案: 内容明确但表达重复且有语法错误。应先给出主题句，再用一两句说明原因或举例，并去掉重复词，注意主谓一致和时态。可加入连接词如“because”或“so”。

例: Price is my main consideration because I’m a student and have a limited budget. So I usually look for practical, affordable items like books or useful gadgets rather than expensive luxuries.

提案: 回答包含个人感受，但开头“不诚实吗？”不适合考试。应直接回答并用一两句具体原因或例子支撑，注意语法（如“I feel nervous”）。可加连接词如“so”或“therefore”。

例: No, I’ve never given a handmade gift because I’m not confident in my crafting skills. I feel nervous about making something by hand, so I usually buy a ready-made item instead.

提案: 观点简单且表述不自然，有语法和重复问题。答案应更谨ent，说明自己的观点并给出理由或例子，同时避免绝对化说法。使用连接词如“however”或“for example”。

例: Not necessarily. While an expensive gift can show you care, I believe thoughtfulness matters more. For example, a meaningful handwritten letter or a small, personal present can express feelings better than a costly item.

× No, I'm not good at choosing gifts. I seldom buy gifts for others.

✓ No, I'm not good at choosing gifts. I seldom buy gifts for other people.

句中原句使用的“others”作宾语时在口语中可接受，但在此句更自然的表达是“other people”。这是词汇使用的细微问题，属于现在时语境应保持自然用法。建议用“other people”来避免歧义。

× I only buy gifts on my best friend's birthday or on other vacations.

✓ I only buy gifts for my best friend's birthday or on other holidays.

原句中使用“on my best friend's birthday”可以，但“other vacations”不自然，应该用“holidays（节日）”。时态仍为一般现在时，建议使用更地道的名词。

× I will consider the price of the gift because now now I'm just a student, I don't have work so I can't afford a gift that are that that is expensive.

✓ I consider the price of the gift because I'm just a student now; I don't have a job, so I can't afford an expensive gift.

错误类型为现在时和主谓一致混杂以及词汇问题。原句中“It will consider”不正确（学生说“I will consider”可用但更自然为一般现在时“consider”表习惯）。重复的“now now”和“that are that that is”是冗余且引起语法错误；“work”应为名词“a job”。建议用现在时表习惯性动作，简化冗余词并改正可数名词。

× Do you tell the truth? I never give others a handmade gift because I'm not good at making something by hand.

✓ To be honest, I've never given anyone a handmade gift because I'm not good at making things by hand.

原句“Do you tell the truth?”不符合语境，应该是“to be honest”或“I've never...”。错误类型涉及情态/时态表达与宾格代词使用（others→anyone）。另外现在完成时（I've never given）更合适表示过去到现在的经验。建议使用更自然的开头詞并将现在完成时用于经验表述。

× I'm feel nervous when I'm making something and I think it is more convenient to buy something.

✓ I feel nervous when I make something, and I think it's more convenient to buy something.

原句中“I'm feel”是主系表结构错误，应为“I feel”。“when I'm making something”可以改为一般现在时“when I make something”表习惯。此外缩写“it's”更自然。建议去掉多余的助动词并使用正确时态。

× Yes, somebody can tell you appreciation by the value of the gift.

✓ Yes, someone can tell your level of appreciation from the value of the gift.

原句“tell you appreciation”用法不当，应改为“tell your appreciation”或更自然的“tell your level of appreciation”。“somebody”换为“someone”更自然。错误类型为代词/短语搭配问题。建议使用正确动词短语搭配。

× If you give give them a very expensive gift, then we'll think you are sure great.

✓ If you give them a very expensive gift, then they'll think you're great.

原句有重复单词“give give”，并且“we'll think you are sure great”不自然且语法错误。主语与谓语应一致，且“sure great”错误。根据上下文应为“they'll think you're great”或“people will think you're generous”。建议删去重复，使用合适代词与形容词（如 generous 或 great）。