Gifts— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然并使用簡潔的句子結構。避免語法錯誤（如時態和冠詞），並用連接詞組織思路。可以先直接回答，再給一到兩個具體原因或例子以豐富內容。注意人稱和動詞一致（e.g. I worry, I hesitate）。

例: No, I'm not very good at giving gifts. I often worry that my parents or friends won't like what I choose, so I spend a long time deciding. For example, I once bought a present that my friend didn’t use because it didn’t match their taste.

提案: 回答要更連貫，避免短句碎片。先用一個主句回答頻率或時間，再用連接詞（because/so/for example）補充具體細節。注意介詞和冠詞用法（e.g. on my friend's birthday; give gifts to them）。

例: I usually give gifts on my friends' birthdays because it's a special day to celebrate. For example, I always write a short card and wrap the present nicely, and my friends are often surprised and happy.

提案: 注意用詞準確（不要說 consider about，要說 consider），並使用更具體的細節來說明“personal style”和“habitat”指什麼。用連接詞將原因和例子連起來，語句控制在最多五句內。

例: I consider my friend's tastes and lifestyle when choosing a gift. For instance, if they like reading, I might buy a novel or a bookmark, but if they enjoy sports I would choose something related to their hobby.

提案: 句子需更正確和清晰。使用正確時態（use present perfect or past simple consistently）並具體說明你做了什麼手工（duel可能是拼寫錯誤）。控制句子長度並用連接詞說明過程和結果。

例: Yes, I once made a handmade scarf for a friend. I spent about a week knitting it, which was difficult because I'm not good at needlework, so the scarf turned out a bit uneven but my friend appreciated the effort.

提案: 表達要更精簡並避免重複。先給直接答案（Yes/No/Not necessarily），接著用一到兩句說明原因並給例子。注意語法（e.g. 'rather than price' or 'rather than price alone'），避免多餘詞彙。

例: Not necessarily. I think thoughtfulness matters more than price; a handmade card or a meaningful gift can show more feeling than something expensive. For example, a photo album of shared memories can be very touching.

× No I'm not good at giving gifts because I always worried that my parents, my friends don't like the gift that I send so I always hesitant a lot while giving gifts.

✓ No, I'm not good at giving gifts because I always worry that my parents and my friends won't like the gift that I send, so I am often very hesitant when giving gifts.

句子中使用了现在时的语境（通常行为、习惯），但错误地用了过去式“worried”与形容词短语“hesitant”缺少系动词。应使用一般现在时“worry”表示经常发生的事情；否定将来用法“won't like”；并用“am often very hesitant”或“feel very hesitant”完整表达状态。建议：注意区分一般现在时与过去时，主语后使用适当的系动词。

× When it is on my friend's birthday, I always give my gift for them. Because it is the important day. They always surprised that I give gift for them.

✓ When it's my friend's birthday, I always give them a gift because it's an important day. They are always surprised that I give them a gift.

此处描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时。原句中“give my gift for them”表达不自然，需改为“give them a gift”。“They always surprised”缺少系动词，应为“They are always surprised”。建议：用一般现在时描述习惯；宾语位置要正确，注意使用适当的动词和系动词。

× I always consider about my friend's habitat and their personal style because I think it is important that the gift whether fit for them.

✓ I always consider my friend's hobbies and their personal style because I think it's important whether the gift fits them.

“consider”不接介词“about”，直接加宾语；原文“habitat”用词错误，应为“hobbies”或“interests”。“whether fit for them”结构不完整，应为“whether the gift fits them”或“if the gift is suitable for them”。建议：不要在“consider”后加“about”，检查词汇搭配并完成从句结构。

× Yes, I had made a duel for my friend. I spent a week to make, days to make it. It is difficult for me because I'm not very good at needlework. So finally it is a little ugly.

✓ Yes, I made a doll for my friend. I spent a week making it. It was difficult for me because I'm not very good at needlework, so in the end it was a little ugly.

描述过去发生的事情应使用一般过去时“made”，而不是过去完成时“had made”（没有与另一过去事件的时间关系）。“duel”是拼写错误，应为“doll”。“I spent a week to make”应改为“I spent a week making it”或“I spent a week to make it”但更自然为前者。最后关于结果要用过去时“it was a little ugly”。建议：注意时态选择（简单过去用于独立的过去事件），检查拼写并使用动名词表示花费时间。

× Not necessarily because it depends on thoughtfulness, but rather than prices sometimes, sometimes people also people prefer handcraft or some.

✓ Not necessarily, because it depends on thoughtfulness rather than price. Sometimes people also prefer handmade gifts.

句子结构混乱，比较结构应为“depends on A rather than B”。“rather than prices sometimes”位置错误且“prices”复数不太自然，用“price”或“cost”更好。“handcraft”用词不当，应为“handmade gifts”。建议：理清句子主干，正确使用比较连接词“rather than”，并用更自然的名词短语表达手工礼物。