History— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够自然。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和语法。

例: Yes, I studied history before college because it was a compulsory subject in China. However, I found it quite boring and didn't do well in it.

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用连词使句子更流畅，并准确描述学习方法。

例: I attended two history classes every day and completed the homework assigned by my teacher, which mostly involved memorizing important events and historical figures.

提案: 回答内容较为简单且重复，缺乏具体细节。建议提供更多具体理由和例子，避免重复表达。

例: Learning history can make people more interesting because they can share many fascinating stories. Additionally, it helps us understand how past events shape our present society.

提案: 回答过于绝对且表达重复，缺乏逻辑连接。建议表达观点时使用适当的连接词，并避免重复。

例: I don't think history should be a compulsory subject. It could be an optional course for those who are interested, while others can focus on subjects they prefer.

× Yes, before I entering the college, history is a compulsory course in China's curriculum.

✓ Yes, before I entered the college, history was a compulsory course in China's curriculum.

这里的时间是过去，所以动词时态应该用过去式。'entering' 是现在分词，不符合句意，应改为过去式 'entered'。同时，后半句也应使用过去时态 'was'。

× But I really I I I did really bad at the learning of history.

✓ But I really did really badly at learning history.

'did really bad' 中 'bad' 应该用副词形式 'badly' 来修饰动词 'did'。另外，'the learning of history' 结构不自然，改为 'learning history' 更简洁。

× I don't know why.

✓ I didn't know why.

根据上下文，描述的是过去的情况，时态应为过去时 'didn't know'。

× And I'm not interested in history too.

✓ And I wasn't interested in history either.

描述过去的兴趣，时态应为过去时 'wasn't interested'。'too' 用于肯定句，否定句中应使用 'either'。

× I hate I think his story is boring.

✓ I hate it. I think history is boring.

句子结构混乱，缺少宾语。'his story' 应为 'history'，且应分成两句表达。

× Uh, I just took two history class every day and do the homework my history and history teacher left to me almost.

✓ Uh, I just took two history classes every day and did the homework my history teacher left to me almost always.

'class' 应为复数 'classes'，动词时态应统一为过去时 'did'。

× Mostly this homework was to recite to remember a lot of events and character in history events.

✓ Mostly this homework was to recite and remember a lot of events and characters in history.

'character' 应为复数 'characters'，'history events' 表达重复，改为 'history' 即可。

× I found people who are knowledgeable about history is very charming because they know a lot of stories.

✓ I found people who are knowledgeable about history are very charming because they know a lot of stories.

主语 'people' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'。

× But actually I don't think it had any else benefit.

✓ But actually I don't think it has any other benefits.

时态应为现在时 'has'，'any else benefit' 结构不正确，应为 'any other benefits'。

× No, definitely, definitely no.

✓ No, definitely not.

'definitely no' 不是正确的否定表达，应使用 'definitely not'。

× I think, I even don't think that it should be a compulsory course because I think it could be a habit, a hobby of somebody.

✓ I think, I don't even think that it should be a compulsory course because I think it could be a habit or a hobby for somebody.

'even don't think' 语序错误，应为 'don't even think'。'a habit, a hobby of somebody' 结构不自然，改为 'a habit or a hobby for somebody'。

× It should be that if you like it, you take the history code.

✓ It should be that if you like it, you take the history course.

'code' 应为 'course'，表示课程。

× If you don't like it, there is no need to.

✓ If you don't like it, there is no need to take it.

句子不完整，缺少动词 'take it'，使句子完整。