Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在较多错误，建议练习完整句子表达，注意时态和逻辑顺序。可以尝试用简单句子清晰描述借钱的时间、原因和情境。

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from others, but only when I was a child. For example, when I was in primary school, I sometimes didn't have enough money to buy snacks, so I would borrow a little from my friends.

提案: 表达不够自然，语法错误较多，建议练习使用完整句子和正确的时态，注意主谓一致。可以尝试用连贯的句子说明借钱给朋友的条件和原因。

例: Yes, I lend money to my friends if they ask me. However, if the person is not a close friend, I usually don't lend money because I am not sure if they will pay me back.

× Yes, I have but.

✓ Yes, I have, but only in my childhood.

原句结构不完整，缺少必要成分，导致表达不清。应补充完整句子，使意思明确。

× Is only my childhood because in the night was.

✓ It was only in my childhood because at night...

句子缺少主语和谓语，且表达混乱。应补充主语和谓语，使句子完整。

× In the primary school.

✓ When I was in primary school.

短语不完整，缺少谓语，无法独立成句。应补充完整表达。

× I don't have enough money and I.

✓ I didn't have enough money, and I...

句子不完整，缺少后续内容，且时态应与上下文一致。

× Almost.

✓ Almost never.

单词“Almost”不能单独成句，应补充完整表达。

× Follow the few monies.

✓ Followed the little money.

“few”用于可数名词，“money”是不可数名词，应使用“little”。

× Yes, if my friends.

✓ Yes, if my friends ask me,

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致表达不清。

× Ask me, I will land to him or her.

✓ ask me, I will lend to him or her.

“land”拼写错误，应为“lend”，表示借出。

× But if the people is not my very close friends and I, I can't.

✓ But if the people are not my very close friends, I can't.

“people”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× Sure.

✓ be sure

单词“Sure”不能单独成句，应补充谓语动词使句子完整。

× Have you back to me?

✓ have it back from me?

表达不完整且语序错误，应调整为正确表达。

× I will not.

✓ I will not.

句子本身无语法错误，但上下文需补充完整表达。