Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to give a clear and direct answer to the question first, then add specific reasons or examples. Use simple and correct sentence structures, and avoid unnecessary words. For example, say 'Yes, I have borrowed money before to build my home and to support my children's education abroad.'

例: Yes, I have borrowed money before to build my home and to support my children's education abroad. It was necessary because these expenses were quite high, and I needed financial help to manage them.

提案: Answer the question directly and clearly, using correct grammar and complete sentences. Add details to explain when or why you lent money. For example, say 'Yes, I have lent money to friends when they needed help, especially during emergencies.'

例: Yes, I have lent money to friends when they needed help, especially during emergencies. I believe in supporting people close to me when they face difficulties.

× Yes, of course I ever the word money or from a somebody.

✓ Yes, of course I have ever borrowed money from somebody.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and lacks auxiliary verbs. 'I ever the word money or from a somebody' is incorrect. The correct form is 'I have ever borrowed money from somebody' to properly express the experience using the present perfect tense and correct pronouns.

× I think I like you.

✓ I think I like you.

This sentence is grammatically correct but contextually inappropriate. It seems out of place in the response about borrowing money. No grammatical correction needed here.

× I want this money for make my home and for my kids to study outside Kuwait.

✓ I want this money to make my home and for my kids to study outside Kuwait.

The verb 'make' should be in the infinitive form 'to make' after 'want this money'. The phrase 'for make my home' is incorrect; it should be 'to make my home' to express purpose.

× Yes, yes, some people wanted some money. I give him a the money.

✓ Yes, yes, some people wanted some money. I gave them the money.

The pronoun 'him' is incorrect if referring to multiple people; 'them' is appropriate. Also, 'give' should be in past tense 'gave' to match 'wanted'. The article 'a the money' is incorrect; it should be 'the money'.

× Is sometime.

✓ Sometimes.

'Is sometime' is incorrect. The correct adverb is 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Is' is unnecessary here.