Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to use more natural and grammatically correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure by using linking words. For example, instead of 'we still doing this until today', say 'we still do this today'. Also, add more specific details to enrich your answer.

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my close friends several times. We still do this today because we trust each other, and it feels natural to help one another financially when needed.

提案: Focus on clearer sentence construction and correct grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, provide more specific reasons or examples to support your answer. Avoid filler words like 'Oh'.

例: Yes, I have lent money to my close friends, but not to strangers. Since we are friends, it's important to support each other, especially during difficult financial times.

× we still doing this until today

✓ we are still doing this until today

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'are' needed for the present continuous tense. The correct form is 'we are still doing this' to indicate an ongoing action.

× I lend money at Oh my close friends

✓ I lend money to my close friends

The preposition 'at' is incorrect here; the correct preposition to indicate the recipient of lending is 'to'. Also, 'Oh' seems to be a typo and should be removed.

× lend money at Oh my close friends

✓ lend money to my close friends

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used; 'to' is the correct preposition to indicate the person receiving the money.

× specially in these moments when we don't have a lot of money

✓ especially in these moments when we don't have a lot of money

The word 'specially' is incorrect here; the correct adverb is 'especially' to emphasize the situation.