Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够清晰，语法和表达存在错误，建议简化句子结构，明确表达借钱的情境和还款方式，同时避免冗余。

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my friends when I forgot my wallet and couldn't pay. I always make sure to pay them back as soon as possible.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用简单明了的句子，直接说明借钱的情况和期望对方还款。

例: Yes, I have lent money to my friends when they didn't have enough to buy something. I usually ask them to return it later.

× Yes, for example when I'm out and with all to my phone with me and they can't make a payment I will borrow money from my friends and the repainting when I get back.

✓ Yes, for example, when I'm out and don't have my phone with me and can't make a payment, I will borrow money from my friends and repay it when I get back.

原句结构混乱，缺少必要的连词和正确的表达，导致句意不清。建议理清句子结构，使用正确的连词和词汇，使句子通顺易懂。

× Yes, for you since. When my friends around me don't have enough money to buy items and I do have some, I will end it tuning and ask and then to return it to me later.

✓ Yes, for example, when my friends around me don't have enough money to buy items and I do, I will lend it to them and ask them to return it to me later.

原句中存在词语错误和句子结构混乱，如“for you since”和“end it tuning”无意义。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构，表达清晰完整的意思。