Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai, đồng thời sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và nói dài dòng. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from my mother because I am currently a student and do not have a stable income. Therefore, borrowing from her is the only way I can manage my expenses.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như thì động từ. Ngoài ra, hãy thêm một vài chi tiết để câu trả lời phong phú hơn và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: No, I have never lent money to others because I am still a student and do not have a stable income. Therefore, I cannot afford to lend money to anyone at the moment.

× Definitely yes I have borrowed money from my mother Moe's because now I'm currently a student so I have an arrow work so I don't have any money in my budget.

✓ Definitely yes, I have borrowed money from my mother Moe because now I'm currently a student so I have an errand work so I don't have any money in my budget.

The phrase 'arrow work' is incorrect; it should be 'errand work' which means small tasks or jobs. Also, a comma is needed after 'Definitely yes' for clarity.

× So boring boring man baring money from my mother is the only way for me to buy.

✓ So borrowing money from my mother is the only way for me to buy.

The phrase 'boring boring man baring' is incorrect and seems to be a mishearing or typo. The correct phrase is 'borrowing money'. 'Borrowing' is the correct verb form here, and 'from' is the correct preposition to indicate the source.

× Actually no, because as I mentioned above I still a student so I haven't go to work so I don't have any money in my pocket.

✓ Actually no, because as I mentioned above, I am still a student so I haven't gone to work so I don't have any money in my pocket.

The sentence is missing the verb 'am' after 'I' to form the present tense 'I am still a student'. Also, 'haven't go' is incorrect; it should be 'haven't gone' as the past participle form of 'go' is 'gone' when used with 'have/has'.

× So if I want to lend someone money I can't do it.

✓ So if I want to lend someone money, I can't do it.

A comma is needed after the conditional clause 'if I want to lend someone money' to separate it from the main clause. The modal verb usage 'can't' is correct here.