Money— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误，如“have borrow”应为“have borrowed”，且部分表达不够清晰，如“agents”和“boring”用词不当。建议注意时态和词汇的准确使用，同时避免表达模糊。可以简洁明了地说明借钱的原因和还款态度。

例: Yes, I have borrowed money from close friends and family on a few occasions. For instance, when I had unexpected medical bills, they helped me manage the situation temporarily. I always make sure to repay the money promptly.

提案: 回答中存在多处语法和拼写错误，如“land mount money money”应为“lent money”，且表达不连贯。建议加强语法基础，注意句子结构和词汇拼写，确保表达清晰流畅。可以简洁说明借钱的对象、原因及自己的态度。

例: Yes, I have lent money to close friends and family members a few times. I believe in helping those who are genuinely in need, especially when the amount is small and I can afford it without financial difficulty.

× I have borrow money from others on a few occasions, usually from close friends or family members.

✓ I have borrowed money from others on a few occasions, usually from close friends or family members.

这里使用的是现在完成时，助动词have后面应该接动词的过去分词形式borrowed，而不是原形borrow。

× For example, when I faced unexpected expenses such as agents, medical bills and boring help me manage the situation temporarily.

✓ For example, when I faced unexpected expenses such as agents' fees, medical bills and borrowing help to manage the situation temporarily.

原句中agents和boring用法不当，agents应为agents' fees（代理费），boring应为borrowing（借款），且boring后缺少宾语，需补充help to manage。

× Surely I have land mount money money to others on a few occasions really too close friends or family members.

✓ Surely I have lent a large amount of money to others on a few occasions, really to close friends or family members.

这里使用现在完成时，助动词have后面应接动词的过去分词形式lent，而不是land。mount money money重复且用词错误，应改为a large amount of money。

× I believe in helping people when they are in genuine need, especially if it's a small account that I can afford to give without any financial stream for example.

✓ I believe in helping people when they are in genuine need, especially if it's a small amount that I can afford to give without any financial strain, for example.

small account用词不当，应为small amount（小额）；financial stream应为financial strain（经济压力）；for example应放在句末作为举例说明。